Reviews for The Traveller |
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![]() ![]() Damn! That was so amazing. I’m speechless. Breathless. Simply unbelievable the haunting beauty of this story. Thank God it has a happy ending or I don’t think my heart could’ve taken it. Thanks so much for this beautiful, beautifully written story |
![]() ![]() Wow, the story is woven so artfully and so beautifully! Thank you 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you so much for this. lovely story! |
![]() ![]() lovely story. i especially enjoyed the little touch at the end, with the circle closing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazing story! It's so cleverly woven and so extremely well written, a treat to read from beginning to end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I am amazed with this story! Brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have an amazing way with words! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peter Parker! Damn I was clutching my stomach so hard! XD For a second I thought it was a typo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() just lovely story, thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the implication that she had travelled in the first place.. love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my God this was so beautiful and creative! just wow. I had goosebumps the whole time. I haven't read a ss/hg fic this good in a while. amazing work |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good idea. The plot is good, too. The structure of the story is well thought out, there are time jumps, but not much confusion about when and what happened. It was interesting throughout the book. The dynamics of the narrative don't diminish. There are no pointless fillers. Nice size of the fic. There is internal "conflict" in the piece (the relationship between SS and HG and strengthening them), but no external conflict (SSHG vs. world circumstances and other characters). Liked how they incorporated the situation with the comment about Hermione's teeth. I agree with the author: SS/HG is destiny ;) Liked that Severus doesn't think Lily is a saint. The happy ending is present, which is important. P.S. Парадокс: откуда появилась цепочка? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree, Lily Evans was not worthy of such love. It's a credit to Severus that he's so loyal in his affections. That's why I love it when Hermione, in the fics, shows by her example that Lily is a superficial, heartless, unfaithful bitch. |