Reviews for The Traveller
Guest chapter 11 . 11/3/2023
Wow, the story is woven so artfully and so beautifully!
Thank you 3
digio chapter 11 . 8/6/2023
thank you so much for this. lovely story!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/17/2023
lovely story. i especially enjoyed the little touch at the end, with the circle closing
Maggiewall chapter 11 . 4/9/2023
Amazing, amazing story!
CassiopeiaB chapter 11 . 6/28/2022
What an amazing story! It's so cleverly woven and so extremely well written, a treat to read from beginning to end.
RowenaC chapter 11 . 4/13/2022
Wow, I am amazed with this story! Brilliant
RowenaC chapter 4 . 4/13/2022
You have an amazing way with words!
RowenaC chapter 3 . 4/13/2022
Peter Parker! Damn I was clutching my stomach so hard! XD
For a second I thought it was a typo!
WiseFly chapter 11 . 2/6/2022
just lovely story, thank you
WiseFly chapter 7 . 2/6/2022
i love the implication that she had travelled in the first place.. love it
Zutara4eons chapter 11 . 1/27/2022
oh my God this was so beautiful and creative! just wow. I had goosebumps the whole time. I haven't read a ss/hg fic this good in a while. amazing work
pottohipamus chapter 11 . 11/21/2021
This is beautiful
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 11 . 7/6/2021
Good idea. The plot is good, too. The structure of the story is well thought out, there are time jumps, but not much confusion about when and what happened. It was interesting throughout the book. The dynamics of the narrative don't diminish. There are no pointless fillers. Nice size of the fic. There is internal "conflict" in the piece (the relationship between SS and HG and strengthening them), but no external conflict (SSHG vs. world circumstances and other characters). Liked how they incorporated the situation with the comment about Hermione's teeth. I agree with the author: SS/HG is destiny ;) Liked that Severus doesn't think Lily is a saint. The happy ending is present, which is important.

P.S. Парадокс: откуда появилась цепочка?
SeverusAndHermioneFan chapter 2 . 7/6/2021
I agree, Lily Evans was not worthy of such love. It's a credit to Severus that he's so loyal in his affections. That's why I love it when Hermione, in the fics, shows by her example that Lily is a superficial, heartless, unfaithful bitch.
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 11 . 6/6/2021
What an interesting story. Well written.
Thanks for sharing.
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