Reviews for The Traveller |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm usually not a fan of Hermione/Severus fics, but this was amazing. There was none of the creepiness that derives from their age difference, and it just worked out perfectly. Wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this very much, particularly for the plot's unusual quality! Very well written. Although the first time I read this I had some trouble with the timelines! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a gorgeous read. Thoroughly enjoyed it, and love the idea. Thank you for writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loverly loverly loveryly. Gah. I enjoyed this to the extreme. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an incredible story packed into a very small word count. I wish there was more but you made it quite satisfying as it stands. Thank you for writing and I hope to read more of your works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was strange but I loved it. ~Dark |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Best epilogue ever too. Epilogues are a bitch to write and very few people can do it well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow! That was amazing! I loved it! Brilliantly thought out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow loved the story and the ending :) amazingly written Have to love hgss fluff |
![]() ![]() That was BEAUTIFUL! I wasn't expecting that plot or that ending at all. The ending was lovely and couldn't have been more touching or ideal. I love happy endings! I didn't think that Hermione's "voice" in the epilogue seemed like that of a ten-year-old girl, but it would have been awkward if you had written the conclusion with childish descriptions and narration when the rest of the story is clear and mature, heh. I adore all of your work. You're a gifted writer. Thank you so much for writing- and quite skillfully, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so everything comes full circle-how splendid to see the couple old and at peace and happy; and how lovely they show the young Hermione how to find her path to where they sit now. Very good story-thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, I suspect there are many worse places than Australia in 1955. I wonder-will they be there to help Hermione's parents a few decades later? Lovely chaper. I'm glad Julia wants to help, not hinder. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story :P very cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. This is wonderful. Both of them are finally telling the truth-and both of them will have something to look forward to. I suspect this is the first time that anybody ever actually _wanted_ Severus, and not just what he could do for them. |