Reviews for 6 Ficlets All in a Row
deangirl1 chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
Brilliant! Freaky llama - RFLMAO! and salty? lol! Of course, the best part is the ending - loved that Sam doesn't tell Dean why he stayed and gets the benefit of seeing how pleased Dean is that he did stay...
deangirl1 chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
Loved this! And I agree - writing is WAY harder than fighting monsters...

Love how Sammy is here... totally manipulating Dean... and I am a HUGE fan of whump without plot...
Zatnikatel chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I can’t actually find the words to adequately describe the sheer loveliness of this. It’s beautiful.
Trish62 chapter 6 . 4/19/2009
Well, that was a nice way to start the day. Six awesome stories.

I love in this that Sammy stays calm, and that Dean has a slow steady feakout - not some over the top craziness.

And that your other characters are more than just a name. I actually get an image of Ray, and the Little Dean nickname is a detail that brings him to life.

Thanks for sharing. Well Done!
PADavis chapter 6 . 4/19/2009
Beautifully done. Really.

Thanks for posting these here!

Phoebe
Trish62 chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
Oh boys. Love the little lie at the end. Once again protecting -giving the other what he needs.

Freaky llama hehehehe
PADavis chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
How did you know that drugged up loopy Dean is my very favorite kind of Dean. Sighs in extreme happiness.

Phoebe
Trish62 chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
Are we cuddling?

Yeah, really getting this one, too. Last night my daughter fainted during a performance of a high school show. I bolted to the stage, sure that she'd be ok, but those anxious moments waiting for her to come around - awful. She's fine. Took a ride in the ambulance just to give me grey hair, but otherwise, all is good.

Love all the little details, like Dean going to his knees, thinking he'd feel that in the morning. All the things the show doesn't have time to delve into.
PADavis chapter 4 . 4/19/2009
OMG - its bad right now, Dean wants to say. That and Sam staring through Dean as if he were nothing - you are now officially twisting the dull spoon. Definitely flail worthy.

Phoebe
Trish62 chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
So I love when there is pain, and a little snark. " Dad always told you...

And, Sam just knowing what Dean needs. You really have your characters down. So in character.

You should write more teen-Winchesters.
PADavis chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
No need to apologise for plotless whump. Love this:

He seems to have grown three inches in the past week, and Dean notes with surprise that the top of Sam’s head is now level with his nose.

Phoebe
Trish62 chapter 2 . 4/19/2009
Oh these are angsty!
PADavis chapter 2 . 4/19/2009
Gah - dull spoon to heart. Excellent.

Phoebe
Trish62 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
What a lovely story. When I got divorced a few years ago, someone suggested I get a massage. I couldn't do it. I knew if anyone put a warm hand on my back, I would break into tears. I love how you capture that feeling at the end.

On to the next chapter...
PADavis chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Dude - this was just great. The line about the Mounds (ahem) and Almond Joy almost made coffee come out of my nose. The chipmunk-o-meter, classic, so funny, and then the end, so sadly nostalgic. Sweet ride here.

Phoebe
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