|Reviews for The Girl|
| Nickolaus Pacione chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Okay I am not sure if you own the characters for this story or these were some of Mr. Stephen King's works that you were playing with. This is coming from a published author who writes in horror and supernatural suspense. I have to say this story has a decent delivery with it, and coming from someone whose spent 20 years writing this sort of thing you learn to catch the traits. This one calls to mind some of King's Skeleton Crew stories or even his Nightmares & Dreamscapes work. If you are thinking about getting published if you write original work I wouldn't mind seeing what you have if you don't write slash fiction. It's hard to review stories that are on this site because it's sort of like hearing a cover track from a heavy metal band and looking for the original.