Reviews for Make Me Whole Again
readingpower chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
This was so cool! And it made me ship Canliet.
Ersatz Einstein chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
You had a couple of minor errors (such as the punctuation in the first quote) but they detracted little from your story. The narration, particularly in the first paragraph, was flawless. I could picture the quiet, focused, yet relaxed scene perfectly. The word "boy" was a little intrusive, but I get why you used it instead of "man." Even the introduction of the more serious topics did nothing to shatter the atmosphere you created, instead adding a mature, serious quality that was entirely welcome.
tragiang chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
It was very adorable, it was long, but that's because I'm impatient at the moment. But it's good, really good, It's like one of those episodes where everything sort of slows down, and you just have to admire the subtlety and beauty behind it all.
Bat Lorena chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
This is... amazing.

I don't know what else to say, really... the detail, and description, and everything is just so wonderful!
CookiesAreSoHot chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Wow... CanadaXLithuania.. That's actually a pretty sweet couple. Great job on the story.
lady of love chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
That was cute~! **.