|Reviews for A New Beginning|
| Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
| Peggy chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Wow - it's been a long time since someone wrote about PB. I loved the Chris/TC pairing. I hope you write more. Great job.
| Maartje chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
And they lived happily ever after- or until the next problem pops up, you never know!
Anyway, I really enjoyed it, thanks for writing! I love me some TC/Chris. The summary had me worried that Chris would just chuck her FBI job and hop back onto the bike, so I was very happy to read that she was willing to comprimise and just transfer closer.
Now for the concrit:
It might be easier to read if you wrote dialogue between "".
Ex: "So you're coming back?" He couldn't etc.
Two tiny little mistakes:
plain should be plane
degraded should be demoted
But now I am just nitpicking. Thanks so much for writing and posting this. I really loved reading about Chris and TC again :D