I wish we saw more Rosalie and Emmett especially since you said we would see more of Chelsea. We only got glimpses of their family

Jesus christ i have cried so hard!

This story...Wow...It got really hectic at the end. I get angst and all but a daughter on her deathbed, a dead baby, and a miraculous last minute save when pulling the plug.

Bella was atrocious. Edward and his reactions were atrocious.

It’s a clump of cells, not a baby. She loses more cells when she washes her face each day. Also, she’s a HS drop out yet she’s suddenly got money to open a business and in SAN FRANCISCO - one of the most expensive cities in the country. Sure, Jan. This shit is too farfetched for even fanfiction

This story was incredible! The last few chapters had me in tears more often than I want to admit but oh my gosh, this poor family! I’m glad they can finally get their happy ever after! I can’t wait to read more of your work!

God, I've been looking for this story for months! I've read it before. But every time I searched "fiancee" it didn't come up. And I was so sure that the summary had the word in it. Anyway, I'm going to REALLY enjoy this reread now.

Natalie Alice, she is amazing! My grandmother is called Eleonora Natalina and she is Italian, I always wondered why her middle name was Natalina, but I guess now I know because she was born on Christmas Day. Your story is incredible thank you so much! Natalie is so cute as well, the reunion was actually pretty good I love the suspense.

OMG, this is amazing. Incredible job with this chapter, I love how she went into labour though that was kind of funny. Angela was so considerate

I look up philosophy, reviews it with updates and your story is amazing. I love how Bella found out she was pregnant, it was kind of dramatic but I wish she told Edward or Alice even. That would kind of get the point of the story, oh I’m pregnant three chapters of the story is over, love it though.

I know what you mean, the classically she is that you just can’t help writing about. Love the first chapter, rereading is actually so I know what happens but I’m going to comment as I go anyway Bella calling the baby a ball of cells, awesome. I watched a documentary once, and it about two months it is just literally a ball of cells you’re right. Just letting you know, you misspelt fetus, that’s okay however. This story is amazing, imagine if Bella really had gotten the abortion, sorry spoiler alert, and Natalie didn’t exist, another spoiler, So don’t read the review if you haven’t already finished the story or something or go into the next chapter of the next one sorry. Love it

People have survived after life support has been turned off

I thought Emmett was Bella’s cousin not alice’ Brother

They need their parents and their family

Where is Tess?

Jasper?