|Reviews for Subtlety|
| The Animaniac Dude chapter 4 . 10/12/2009
ROFLMAO. I just realized I skipped this chapter, and by god is it funny. it's even more hilarious when you take in the fact that TV Tropes Ruined My Life. guffaw. funny site, that.
| The Animaniac Dude chapter 5 . 10/12/2009
and so, mihawk's uber-knife is born. lol. wait, did he ever even catch that rabbit? it didn't look like it, but then curry said in his journal that he caught one... i'm confused...
I think we're all in agreement that curry is the current world's greatest swordsman. it's such a forgone fact that it's not even gonna be a surprise.
| Senko-Chan chapter 5 . 10/12/2009
Yay! Another chapter! This one was really good. I liked the way it showed the persistence and determination necessary to make even small steps towards mastery. Update soon! (PS I am also very excited about Zoro possibly learning Mihawk's backstory. And just seeing more of Mihawk in recent chapters.)
| Ilex Crataegus chapter 3 . 10/11/2009
Also, I've just read that you want to get some fan art for your fictions one day...I think I now what I'll be doing during boring classes this week Scrapping up something that looks like Boy won't be hard, but if you had some additional information on Curry I'd be glad to try on that one too :D
| Ilex Crataegus chapter 5 . 10/11/2009
Hehe, again a wonderful chapter :D I think this is probably the only proper, multi-chapter (and regularly updated :P) Mihawek-fic I've had the pleasure of reading... I really enjoyed this chapter, I like how you put the creation of the little cross-shaped knife into it, as well as Boys understanding of "using his senses".
Also, I too hope that we will find out more about him in the Manga, he's one of my favourite characters but hell, Oda could give us some information!
| Ilex Crataegus chapter 4 . 8/27/2009
| AttilaTheBunny chapter 4 . 8/20/2009
Hey, it's me. I'm back,and I'm really sorry for failing to review the last chapter. It makes me feel very terrible about myself, it really does. No, like, it actually does.
But that's enough of that. I liked this chapter. It was delightfully ridiculous, and Mary Sue parodies are always fun. Nothing better than a little good old-fashioned making-fun-of-crappy-authors. Fun to do, and fun to read. Ridiculousness is always fun. I especially liked Curry's way of killing the Sue. It was fun hearing him say what all of us are thinking when we see stories with characters like that. Or perhaps some of us even say those things. But I don't have the constitution to deal with writing and characterization that bad. Therefore, I tend to avoid those stories like the plague.
But all of this deviates from my original point (yes, I had one) which is simply that you are brilliant. You really, really are. I love your all your stories.
| SoaringFyreByrd chapter 4 . 8/15/2009
Thanks for the well wishes of my computer XD But lukily I will soon buy myself a laptop, meaning all the reviews one could want :D
Oh, no matter how hard I tried, I kept thinking of Curry as Deadpool for breaking the fourth wall all the time XD X-men has infected me Funny chapter though . *stalks part V, awaiting its arrival*
| SoaringFyreByrd chapter 3 . 8/3/2009
Once again, a fabulous chapter. Made my day, since my comp broke (damn viruses ) and now is my only chance to use my parent's. So, boo ya you! XD
Hmm...time to add "what I liked best about this chapter" Methinks it's the descriptions of "boy's" hangovers. I could just imagine his hatred for "beer, beer, and more beer" XD
| UnderDog chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Whoo! New chapter! Someday I'm going to have to get an account so that I can put a watch on this story.
Let's see... Curry is the coolest OC I've ever seen, and I see a lot *coughobsessedcough*. I'm glad Boy got his butt handed to him once because if he's giong to be the greatest, he needs some crap to happen to him first, right? XD
Awesome story, update, all that jazz.
| Sunayoko chapter 2 . 7/31/2009
Curry is interesting. At points he reminds me of teachers in books I've read before. He also reminds me of Jack Sparrow, sort of...
| Sunayoko chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I never really thought about Hawk-eye so indepthly. This is very very good.
| Senko-Chan chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
Yay an update! This is definitely one of the stories I'm most avidly following. Poor drunk Mihawk, this chapter wasn't so pleasant for him, lol. As always, update asap :)
| mihawk chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
whats with pineaple isnt it pineaple
| SoaringFyreByrd chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
*insert comments about how awesome you're writing is* XD I love how you add little reminders of the One Piece we all know in your story, like Smoker and the whale. And speaking of Smoker, I believe you captured his character very well.
Oh, Curry's talking is so fun to read XD Random bit o' opinion there