Reviews for Closer
Jckitch chapter 1 . 3/4
Their interaction is amazing, I enjoy Naruto realistic response but I dislike their premature relationship.
kerlangebeauplan chapter 3 . 9/19/2022
Guest chapter 16 . 8/30/2022
Amazing absolutely amazing. This is my first review. I never review a anything. This story has blown my mind.
HurZysn chapter 16 . 8/15/2022
thanks for the interesting story I really liked it
HurZysn chapter 1 . 8/13/2022
okay interesting start. will have to see where this goes?
comfortablynumb16 chapter 4 . 5/14/2022
Sasuke is always a whiny bitch lmao.

Also, that last line was hilarious. Neji making plays like that huh?

On a sidenote, I like how everyone just punches and threatens Naruto as if he isn't 20x stronger than all of them COMBINED xD.

Also, Hinata is just too adorable.
zx20000006 chapter 2 . 4/27/2022
sakura's reactions are a bit extream I mean she is acting like this from chapter one ? where is the denial faze or the competitiveness that is born out of jealousy this sakura is boring she looks like she lost before she even put up a fight! I thought she would start to SLOWLY notice signs of naruto losing interest in her then noticing his increasing interactions with hinata then the denial faze then competitive faze then finally she noticed that she lost the fight. not this instant loser sakura. (If you haven't noticed I really like this kind of drama and i dislike sakura) also sakura is way too dramatic and immediately crumbles into a sobbing mess that is a bit out of character for her she is usually stronger/more stubborn than that.
muzicaldove chapter 16 . 4/20/2021
This was such a great story, but you could have gone in to detail about the honeymoon lol. thank you for writing it!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/1/2021
Also wanted to add: LOVE NEJI AND TENTEN IN THIS CHAPTER, that last line omg
Guest chapter 4 . 1/1/2021
I love how genuinely you portray their relationship. Showing their downs as well as the ups gives that touch of reality! How you showed the doubts and worries that come with new love resonated with me (minus the added struggles of clan heads and demon containers haha) and reminded me of my own past which I adored
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 16 . 12/22/2020
This was an awesome story. I loved it from start to finish. I would've been happy if this had actually happened in the series, after the Pain arc.

Great job on this!
Hinaruto008 chapter 1 . 11/28/2020
I love the story!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/2/2020
Holy hell I’m only four chapters in and I already love EVERYTHING about this fic
Canomi chapter 8 . 9/15/2020
Love how intimate this chapter was. Their closeness was really out of love, not lust.
AleNaruhina chapter 16 . 9/10/2020
I loved this story!
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