Their interaction is amazing, I enjoy Naruto realistic response but I dislike their premature relationship.

lol

Amazing absolutely amazing. This is my first review. I never review a anything. This story has blown my mind.

thanks for the interesting story I really liked it

okay interesting start. will have to see where this goes?

Sasuke is always a whiny bitch lmao.

Also, that last line was hilarious. Neji making plays like that huh?

On a sidenote, I like how everyone just punches and threatens Naruto as if he isn't 20x stronger than all of them COMBINED xD.

Also, Hinata is just too adorable.

sakura's reactions are a bit extream I mean she is acting like this from chapter one ? where is the denial faze or the competitiveness that is born out of jealousy this sakura is boring she looks like she lost before she even put up a fight! I thought she would start to SLOWLY notice signs of naruto losing interest in her then noticing his increasing interactions with hinata then the denial faze then competitive faze then finally she noticed that she lost the fight. not this instant loser sakura. (If you haven't noticed I really like this kind of drama and i dislike sakura) also sakura is way too dramatic and immediately crumbles into a sobbing mess that is a bit out of character for her she is usually stronger/more stubborn than that.

This was such a great story, but you could have gone in to detail about the honeymoon lol. thank you for writing it!

Also wanted to add: LOVE NEJI AND TENTEN IN THIS CHAPTER, that last line omg

I love how genuinely you portray their relationship. Showing their downs as well as the ups gives that touch of reality! How you showed the doubts and worries that come with new love resonated with me (minus the added struggles of clan heads and demon containers haha) and reminded me of my own past which I adored

This was an awesome story. I loved it from start to finish. I would've been happy if this had actually happened in the series, after the Pain arc.

Great job on this!

I love the story!

Holy hell I’m only four chapters in and I already love EVERYTHING about this fic

Love how intimate this chapter was. Their closeness was really out of love, not lust.

I loved this story!