Reviews for Closer
LookOutReader chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
How did Naruto bend down to put hinata on his back? Did i miss them going to the ground first?
kote chapter 14 . 6/4/2014
i loved it heh
Anon Author chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
Never put notes in the middle of a story. It's distracting and breaks up the flow which you had going pretty well. Save those for after the story is done please.
mimi1998 chapter 16 . 6/4/2014
This is it...I like it...this is the story that I want. Story of naruhina romantic way... hinata who is SHY...why you people not make story like this. I just want NARUHINA...PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE MAKE IT...ITS SOOO FRUSTRASING
nsopki2677 chapter 11 . 4/22/2014
I Corinthians 13 ... Nice. Realized what that was as soon as I read "love is patient ..." Only wish you had a made a reference to it in the ending when made a your other reference notes. Plagiarism is no bueno!
Darklordcomp chapter 16 . 4/21/2014
Darklordcomp chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
Get over it sakura stop being dumb and let naruto be happy
Roxas2456 chapter 16 . 4/17/2014
Well i loved it. Super late i know but i loved it :3
chrisgjm chapter 16 . 3/5/2014
Awesome story!
Futon Lord chapter 16 . 3/3/2014
PleasedReader chapter 3 . 2/13/2014
Neji was hilarious. Leavinng evidence, never finding the body.
Dunestyler chapter 15 . 1/27/2014
WOW... just WOW... I have to humbly admit... I actually started crying several times in this story...
and not only because of the sad parts (for example Jiraya) but also on the other parts...
and aside from that I really wish to encounter a woman that's like Hinata, even if just a little. a woman to love me unconditionally and a woman for me to love back...

so... WOW
I really love this fic.
and I hope you won't mind if I try and incluse some of your ideas in my own fic as well, even if I don't do much alike your fic might give me some ideas for it, especially since I'm not too good at writing about feelings. (not to mention having them)

but now... I kinda gotta go.

Ser Serendipity chapter 4 . 1/22/2014

Fullmetal Alchemist reference.
xxnarufanxx chapter 16 . 1/10/2014
a very nice story! i really enjoyed it!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2014
hows come you making naruto scared of kiba? i mean really!? kiba? and not to mention he just utterly destroyed pein who of which is stonger then neji hiashi and kiba put together. but whatever its your story.
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