Reviews for Closer
nsopki2677 chapter 11 . 4/22/2014
I Corinthians 13 ... Nice. Realized what that was as soon as I read "love is patient ..." Only wish you had a made a reference to it in the ending when made a your other reference notes. Plagiarism is no bueno!
Darklordcomp chapter 16 . 4/21/2014
Darklordcomp chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
Get over it sakura stop being dumb and let naruto be happy
Roxas2456 chapter 16 . 4/17/2014
Well i loved it. Super late i know but i loved it :3
chrisgjm chapter 16 . 3/5/2014
Awesome story!
Futon Lord chapter 16 . 3/3/2014
PleasedReader chapter 3 . 2/13/2014
Neji was hilarious. Leavinng evidence, never finding the body.
Dunestyler chapter 15 . 1/27/2014
WOW... just WOW... I have to humbly admit... I actually started crying several times in this story...
and not only because of the sad parts (for example Jiraya) but also on the other parts...
and aside from that I really wish to encounter a woman that's like Hinata, even if just a little. a woman to love me unconditionally and a woman for me to love back...

so... WOW
I really love this fic.
and I hope you won't mind if I try and incluse some of your ideas in my own fic as well, even if I don't do much alike your fic might give me some ideas for it, especially since I'm not too good at writing about feelings. (not to mention having them)

but now... I kinda gotta go.

Ser Serendipity chapter 4 . 1/22/2014

Fullmetal Alchemist reference.
xxnarufanxx chapter 16 . 1/10/2014
a very nice story! i really enjoyed it!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2014
hows come you making naruto scared of kiba? i mean really!? kiba? and not to mention he just utterly destroyed pein who of which is stonger then neji hiashi and kiba put together. but whatever its your story.
Fran.A chapter 15 . 1/5/2014
Feedback from all chapters

Thank you so much for writing this! This is actually one of the most accurate stories of their lives other than Sasuke coming back suddenly and Madara being defeated so easily. The vows made me shriek due their precious words that linked to the Will of Fire.

There were some spelling grammars but no fuss was taken, however, I think that Temari is actually the eldest of her siblings. If I am wrong, my apologies. I did try to see Hinata's dress by the link, but it was sadly deleted.

But all in all, this is my favorite NaruHina fanfic so far; due to it being mostly realistic. Thank you to everyone who helped put their time and effort into making this amazing story. Hope you all have an amazing and thrilling life like how it was portrayed in this story! :)
Bone Princess chapter 15 . 12/24/2013
This. was. perfect. to. the. core.
lovesicknaruhina chapter 16 . 12/7/2013
Very well writen story I was
Impressed! I will be reading
The rest of your writings

Thanks I cried some
Anonymous chapter 16 . 10/6/2013
This was definitely one of the best fics I've ever read! Honestly, I thought the way you portrayed the characters was absolutely perfect, and the length of this was really nice, too! I also really enjoyed how you went in-depth on some of the more minor characters of the series. Overall, this was a realistic, yet romantic, and overall WONDERFUL fic! Pleaseeeee write more naruhina! You're a great writer!
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