Reviews for Closer
Rose Tiger chapter 4 . 4/22/2009
That was a sweet chapter! You spelled Kiba's last name wrong. His last name is "Inuzuka," not "Inukaza."
AirKing chapter 3 . 4/20/2009
I hope you continue. I like the story, because they seem to be taking it 'slow' and not like the other fictions were they jump right to the sack. Also, its funny that Hinata is still stuttering in her new confident self.
TheTurtleWolf chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Great fic! Can't wait for the update!
Larxyn chapter 3 . 4/20/2009
aw this story is adorable! honestly!

cant w8 for an update

keep up the good work

lots of luv

~rosey~
waveofchaos112 chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
omg! i love this story so far! please update soon! and keep up the good work.
Majin Lu chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
I am happy you is doing the 4th chapther, but Closer is M rated /o/

The 3 another chapthers isn't M rated _

Is the next chapter is going to be a lemon then? I imagine it'll be great, cause the kiss scene was perfect and romantic to me

You are great! I love your fanfic /o/
Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I am happy you decided to do this. I am also greatly looking forward to chapter four of your story.
allconspirer chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
This is a really good story, I love the over-protectiveness and Neji and the fluff with NaruHina great, sweet and ever so slightly steamy. I look forward to the next chapter!
NaruHina Love birds chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Nice chapter

I love it.

keep it up
Rose Tiger chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
I love this story. Please keep going.
Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I love this story. It is so romantic. Please keep going.
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