|Reviews for Bad Habit: Book One|
| Do not read chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Anyone thinking of reading this. DON'T!
The author hasn't updated the sequel for one and a half years and cannot be bothered to tell her many loyal readers why. She has just ignored them, despite being an active participant on this site.
She will suck you in to reading her stories, just to leave you high and dry.
DO NOT READ DO NOT READ DO NOT READ DO NOT READ DO NOT READ DO NOT READ DO NOT READ DO NOT READ DO NOT READ DO NOT READ
| Qadi chapter 21 . 4/18/2013
I love the story...where's the rest?
| A.J Scarlet chapter 21 . 2/17/2013
I am aware this story isn't exactly all new and pristine and shizz. But I absolutely loved this story, and puts mine to shame lol. You're writing is impeccable and the style makes for a friggin hilarious read at times. The plot, damn it was devistatingly funny and heart wrenching. This story is awesome, the lemons didn't feel pointless and the dimensions you added to the characters were perfect. Ugh almost wish this was the actual twilight story as opposed to S.M's version. You are awesome lol.
| Sassyvampmama chapter 21 . 1/23/2013
| maphie chapter 11 . 1/22/2013
Best chapter ever! I'm totally teasing. Thoroughly digging this story even though it is very painfully unfolding. I'm feeling a little emo so this is perfect for my mood. I'll hop on a comedy after this. While there are snarky humorous undertones the angst level is high. Plus Alice is getting on my nerves. MYOB, psycho psychic!
| musicalvoice chapter 12 . 1/5/2013
"Sometime Around Midnight" was the perfect song to use for the party! Excited to ride out this rollercoaster of a story.
| heyjued chapter 21 . 8/24/2012
B did the right thing!
| tdavi8 chapter 16 . 7/15/2012
I am really starting to dislike Alice. First with wishing her own brother was never born...WTF that was low, like real low. I understand her being mad and her feeling like it was somewhat his fault, but still that was wrong on many levels. She could've at least said sorry or something but nooo she kept ignoring him. I not like he was the one who kidnapped and abused her... correction THEM (he was every bit as kidnapped and abused as her... possibly more trying to keep her safe). Like Bella said if ANYONE owed soeone something, it was her. He saved her life for goodness sake, and some four/five years ago and he's still paying for it. Now she's blaming Edward for the whole James/Lauren thing. I understand he was a big part of it, but she can't blame him for it or for their psyco actions.
| AmbroCoo chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I just discovered this story and i getting hooked already
| Ad2k chapter 21 . 7/13/2012
I don't like this Alice at all ! Good story I'm going to read book 2 now!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
i added this story to my favs and iv started reading it and i really like it
| Alice Cullens chapter 15 . 6/28/2012
I really just wanted to post a quick comment and say how amazing I find this fanfiction. Usually when reading I get turned off when there is 'flashbacks' in the story. I've never seen an author be able to put flashbacks in without it seeming like they're shoving it down our throats. You, however, are able to make flashbacks /tell/ the story and it's just so relaxing!
Anyway, better get back to reading the rest of this fic! Keep up the great work!
| laurengg chapter 20 . 3/24/2012
i stayed up till 4 am finishing this.. Honestly so good you made me cry! Absolutely loved the story :) great job and Im going right now to read th sequel!
| jasam19 chapter 20 . 2/19/2012
I loved this fic. I 100% agreed with the ending. I couldn't blame Bella at all for needing to leave. I could also completely relate to her not being able to resist Edward no matter how many times he hurt her, but finally having the self-preservation to know she needed to leave.
My only complaint is I wish you wouldn't use lyrics especially in the body of the fic because it's distracting & takes you out of the fic. Your writing easily stands on its own.
Thank you for sharing. Can't wait for more of Book Two.
| Twiolic chapter 20 . 1/30/2012
Looking forward to book 2 to see if you can rectify this mess you created in book 1. Edward deserves to feel the way you left him. As for Alice, I've wanted to slap her more times than not. Good story!