Oh, didn’t see this ending coming. Great story.

Love this! Didn't understand it at first, but then I realized lol

Despite being a 1k-word one-shot, every word was lent importance and made this into the horrorifying, masterful story it is. It was deeply enjoyable to read and I look forward to more of your content. This reminds me of ‘Portrait of a Sociopath as a Loving Mother’—another fic, this time for Harry Potter, which takes the holes in canon describing parents and shows a wickedly sharp and fascinating portrayal of the parent as dark, vicious, and ruthless.

WARNING!Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow

Oooohohohoo, wow! Kill him with fire, he is too dangerous to leave alive!

OH MY GODODJPFVHOIDX. THIS FEELS LIKE OROCHIMARU IN MINATO'S SKIN. THIS SO FUCKED, I FUCKING LOVE IT.

OH MY GOSH! This was amazing! It was brilliant! Just brilliant!

I loved your take on a Dark Minato. So he’s actually Naruto now or something?

the fact that kushina isn't once mentioned speaks volumes

Damn!

Just discovered this jem of a story after twelve years; deliciously terrifying, amazingly written; I got the chills at the end; a dark sinister Minato wasn't something I ever imagined. Bravo !

Holy fuck this was dark yet amazing

o.o what the? o.O what. o.o Is Naruto the reincarnated Minato? He wanted a new body? An Uzumaki body? Tho that's a great gamble he's kinda vulnerable as a baby

Best story ever

Wtf, the idea completely shakes up everything I thought about Minato. True, this isn't canon, but holy shit, ghsi would have been an insane plot twist.

:0 I am shooketh! This is amazing, holy- what a dark take on this and I absolutely love it!