|Reviews for Final Fantasy Versus XIII: Eclipse|
| allysaxox chapter 32 . 5/18/2014
are you still going to continue this? or No?
| bloominglightinthedarksky chapter 31 . 1/24/2014
no...where's the next chapter?
| envygreedgreenthunder chapter 31 . 3/10/2013
I love your story, it has a very interesting plotline and I love how true you are to the characters, you make them easy to believe and interesting to follow. However the story itself is very hard to follow, from what I understand the RVP chapters are the story only rewritten? These later chapters contrast with the previous story and jumping from that one to this one makes me feel like the first story has stopped halfway through and a new one has been started under the new name. I would suggest that if the RVP chapters are a rewrite of the story then you need to remove the first ones and start over because as it is I'm totally confused about it all. The two stories completley different and it makes it difficult to follow the rewrite because I, as a reader, am trying to find out where these new chapters fit with the story I've already read, where in the timeline of the story am I reading these new chapters? Also as you've said, you've changed some of the personalities of the characters and that makes it very difficult to understand, as the story has suddently done a complete change. The changes combined make it difficult to understand the story and many people would give up trying to understand it, however I feel your plot is very story and if not for the difficulties in following it this would probably be one of my favourite stories.
| relly chapter 24 . 1/27/2012
i'm happy for noctis and lightning..only that!...about fang, stella, snow and any other fuckin freakin enemy bitch they can fuckin each other and go to hell...
| relly chapter 29 . 1/26/2012
that vanille is actually not a friend to lightning she's more than stupid bitch, only bitch would push friend under the bus and take advantage from it...
| 261 chapter 24 . 12/9/2011
to complicated, sometimes makes me skip some part of its, if its just loose a bit plus bit funny its will but fun though.. but then again it ok, its nice advanture story to read.. good work thank u very much
| thedoggydog2 chapter 31 . 11/5/2011
I wanna read this story! You've gotta save it!
| OPFAN chapter 31 . 8/7/2011
awesome story! i love it and love lightis to death! though i am a little sad that lightning wont be able to have a child.. T.T
but anyways, im so glad you chose this to be a lightis story :)
| madz.uk chapter 31 . 6/7/2011
in my opinion it was ...'thinking'...smart and i have no idea next when is it that you update soon cos noctis is extremley ...yeah as i was sayin smart
| The-Spontaneous-one chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
I lub dis story
Not sure about da noctxlight ting but defenitly awesome
Get it gur(yea I red ur bio an saw u on deviant art...or,was dat sum1 else?0.o)
| shadow heart chapter 31 . 2/15/2011
i dont want you to take down the revamped eclipse it is very good.i love all of your stories but i like this one the best.i also like the lightis update soon !
| Oblivion Star Seeker chapter 31 . 1/15/2011
Where were you this whole time? I'm not even sure how long it's been since you've last updated. :(
And from what I understand from reading that extra long A/N, you're taking down Eclipse? Or at least the original story? I'm a bit confuzzled at the moment. :P
BUT I think I'm one of those people who'd like to still read your re-vamped story for this. :)
| 1111010101010101010delete10100 chapter 31 . 1/15/2011
woot! that was awesome i thought you gave up on this story!im glad you didnt though xD
i heard you were deleting storys or somthing...please save thione i love your revamep chapter and stor ideas!
cant waite for your next chapter!
| Yuki Minamoto chapter 31 . 1/15/2011
You always have me Dawn. *winks* I shall be faithful to you where ever you go.
StellaXNoctisXLightning, AWESOME THREESOME! Poor Serah. T_T I feel so sorry for the poor girl and I wonder who the other prisoner is?
*thinks* My brain fails me...
I hope you're still going strong Dawn! I'm rooting for you!
| ZoMg1010 chapter 4 . 1/12/2011
I actually wanted to finish this chapter before I left.
Great story, Dawn, I really like it so far! D
Okay, bye now!