|Reviews for On A Sparrow's Wings|
| Mia Nymph chapter 17 . 12/3/2013
This story is truly beautiful! It's so real and so inspiring and GAAAHHH! I can't put it into words!
| RavenShadow83 chapter 17 . 9/30/2013
dark distresing at time but a verry nice ending that curruntly has made tears streaming down my face wonderful thankyou xxxx
| Tori Luna Lily Tonks chapter 17 . 9/25/2013
Oh... Wow! That had such a beautiful ending but has made me an emotional wreck! But seriously it was beautiful. Your wrote this amazingly. I loved it! :)
| Tori Luna Lily Tonks chapter 16 . 9/25/2013
I cried. I'm sitting here crying at the flashback OMG why do you have too be such an amazing author? :'(
| vampiregirl31 chapter 17 . 8/3/2013
i liked it ... i loved the story line
| Yorushike chapter 17 . 9/7/2012
I really love your story, especially the ending. It just seems to fit in so well that at one point when she feels she isn't needed any more she tries to kill herself. As sad as it is it seems to suit her. And I really like how you let them die together, although you are letting all of them become a bit too old :) Edward is 98 and Jacob is still alive and Bella also died with over 91...
But dreaming is permitted, isn't it?
Thanks a lot for a great story, with carachters that seem to stand right next to you
| Yorushike chapter 7 . 9/7/2012
I really like your story, there is just one little flaw. If she had several ribbs broken just a little while ago, than how come no one notices? When emmet and Jake in the last chapter are hugging her, why doesn't it hurt?
But still a great story
| sherry williams chapter 8 . 6/29/2012
well hell charlie is going to be pissed and so will everyone else when she tells them...
| sherry williams chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
omg! she's pregnent isnt she?
| sherry williams chapter 6 . 6/29/2012
oh shit! what the hell just happened to bella?
| sherry williams chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
bella needs help and she needs to talk about what phil did to her...
| sherry williams chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
jacob and edward love it...
| sherry williams chapter 3 . 6/29/2012
poor bella... she will live with this for years... it will always be with her in someway...
| sherry williams chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
omg! bella needs to tell her mom who is there or her dad who is a cop or someone... what the hell did phil say he would do if she told?
| sherry williams chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
damn poor bella... where is her mother at?