Reviews for When He Left
IceQueen04 chapter 9 . 9/12/2010
I think you should put it up for adoption. This story should be continued, its great so far. I would actually want to adopt it is that's ok with you.
alyssa chapter 9 . 1/20/2010
THis was a really good idea for a story. I really hope you find a way to keep this going.
SexyVampyre chapter 5 . 12/20/2009
haha DUMBASS! Bella such a idiot!
yueyuuko chapter 8 . 10/3/2009
please update as soon as you can

can't wait
Erica1993 chapter 7 . 10/1/2009
i think you should make the story longer then 10-15 chapters if they are this short...this story is so good but i am confused...did bella says YES to Edward, and did Edward kill Aro or someone else?
Sushizilla chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Momentarily Sane chapter 8 . 10/1/2009
Once a month?... *sniffle* fine, we'll wait, but those chapters better be worth it ;)

And as for rewriting the story, I admire you for doing that. I don't know, it's just when I write something that was hard to write and I don't like, I think I should rewrite it, but I just can't bring myself to go through it again :P

Good luck, and I'll be keeping up with the story still :D
Mrs.Scissoorhands chapter 7 . 5/2/2009
cool! keep writing plz
catlover09 chapter 7 . 4/28/2009
The story is really good! You should have some longer chapters! Update soon!
Alyce-Cullen chapter 7 . 4/27/2009
Not Aro! No! He is so cool and awesome KO
Natalia x x x x chapter 6 . 4/27/2009
please write more!
Brianna Nicole Cullen chapter 6 . 4/25/2009
this is the best story ever
hayleyhoo chapter 6 . 4/24/2009
aw this was good :D
BooYahIt'sRIYA chapter 6 . 4/24/2009
O.o update son!
mianoel chapter 6 . 4/24/2009
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