This is literally my favorite Dotty fic. I re-read it all the time. I've missed seeing you around here and I hope you will continue to write more for them; you're so talented!

Well i know it sounds silly but, it was very neat. Good imagination, reminds me of my first relationship. Lots of innocence and growing up, very romantic. Thanks. Really enjoyed it.

Sooo good!

This is hot. I love it. You've got something good here.

Omg I fucken loved this story thank you

I loved your version of how letty and dom get together, it was so sweet. I always assumed letty's "tough girl" exterior was due to her rough life growing up and you introduce a great background for that. I don't know if dom's really that nice (maybe young dom like you have them here) but I like how he always wanted to protect letty from the very beginning. I also like how you made vince's character profound and perceptive; in a lot of other fics he's portrayed as a dummy, but I like how he catches on to the behavior of dom and letty.

loved it over and over

I can't tell what to think of Dom's dad- on one hand you tell us he went to jail and wants Nothing to do with the cops (are you suggesting that he was falsely in jail? Or more likely just like.75%of the neighborhood was doing something illegal and got caught. The latter doesn't sound like the kind of guy who would stick his neck out). On the other hand he sounds like he would want Dom to still his neck out for other people.

I love seeing into Dom at an early age and knowing that (deep inside) he isn't a total asshole. That he cares and feels bad for letting a stranger get hurt.

of all, I loved your story from start to finish. Second, I really hope you continue to write a lot of Dom and Letty fics because you're really good at it.

This is the best Dotty i've ever read!

Noooo! Don't let it end I love it

I thought it started out rather slowly, but as I read, I sped up, wanting, almost willing Letty and Dom be together. I thought the characters of Mia, Dom, Letty and Vince were well-rounded and well-written. More please! Thoroughly enjoyed your chapter and will eagerly wait for more! :)

me ha encantado ojala hagas algun otro!

That was cute!

hello, I do not know how long you've uploaded this, but I read it in two days, I loved it!, really, if you upload more please contact me lol, seriously smokeandbetles is my twitter, pleaseeee!

Ps. I'm Hispanic like Letty 3 lol