|Reviews for Dawn of the Kingdom|
| M chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
I'm loving the chapters so far! PLEASE continue! Your writing is amazing and you're staying so true to the characters. Can't wait to read more!
| jojobevco chapter 5 . 8/19/2009
| ThePinkLady16 chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
OMG I luved it, I'm working on a fic. I don't know if it's anygood :)
| eleanor44 chapter 3 . 6/22/2009
I sort of missed a scene where we could see David with his mother and brothers and this was really well written, but what i liked more were the Michelle/David scenes, hope you continue it, now that David has to attend the dinner
| eleanor44 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
I've started reading some Kings fanfiction (i'm a David/Michelle shipper) and i really liked this one, specially how David is that sincere with her and they have nothing to hide, i'd love to see it updated
| pbjtime567 chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
please please please continue your story, it rocks!
| Blebo92 chapter 1 . 4/21/2009