|Reviews for Right in the Kisser|
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
There's alternate universes for you.
| Sano S. Sagara chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Absolutly cute Idea!
| ankellysaurus chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
This story is wonderful. I love well done crossovers.
| Bookish Cupcake chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
Weird, but I like. Wish there was more.
| BundleofContradictions chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
That was strange. Amusing, but strange. How could Edward mistake Harkness for Mustang? Yeah, they both wear military blue (completely different style), but they don't exactly look alike...Mustang's eyes are black & Harkness's eyes are blue!
But I guess you wouldn't notice that when you're punching people out of instinct! ;P
| llothcat chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
| Reo9 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Edwar and Jack stayed true to form right the way through, so accuratly that I could see this playing out so clearly!
Short, but the perfect length.
| Librae-chick chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Short n sweet. Had me wanting more. But I loved it just the way it is. XD ah, never thought I'd see this crossover. Nice work ~3
| kausingkayn chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
That was cute.
| Fibonacci to Infinity chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Jack does look like a real life Mustang... *Ponders* If the ever made a Live-Action FMA movie, John Barrowmen should be Mustang! XD
| xrayjx chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
That was randomly funny!
You should continue it
| Redrose999 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
YAY! Awesome! I'm so happy to see TW/FMA crosses!
| Springfire chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
I would love to see this turned into a longer story. It is completely believable and would be so much fun.
| niver chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Haha! That was sheer genius!
Now I'm getting strange mental images of Jack and Edward.
| RemyofAkyre chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I love the idea of this crossover. The dialogue is very true to the characters.
Any chances of there being another story of this crossover, maybe several chapters long, with amusing Jack and Edward interactions?