Reviews for Bella's Off Day
1llu510n chapter 1 . 6/25
This killed me. I have been thinking about how Edward dealt with Bella's... 'humanity' a lot lately and I just love you for writing this up. And you even made sure they were in character. Great job!
Leila chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
Hilarious...I haven't had one of those days yet..and I hope I never do.
Chime chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Wow all I have to say is LOL
ImBartSimpsonwhothehellareyou chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Hmm, I've always wondered what Edward thought when Bella did this kind of stuff. Very funny.
TheOneWithStarsInHerEyes chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
lol! i don't like Bella much either and nobody ever brings up normal human flaws about her! not that i hate her, but i would hate to be edward in that situation...
csp4 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Just had to read this:) Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! All this has gone thru my head many times! There can't be a human out there that never has these 'problems'. And with vampires having bionic noses, I'm surprised this has never been brought up in any of the FF stories I've read.

Great shot! Well written! Thanks for sharing
Beyond Birthday L Lamperouge chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
This was great, I kinda wish you could have done something about her period, I wonder how uncomfortable that makes Edward... hmmm...
whosurdaddy chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Oh wow that was so funny!
howtobestella chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
The summary made me really curious about this. I did never think about THIS side of Bella, though every human has to face this problems once in a while... Funny how nobody ever included something like that in a scene of their stories. Maybe because it's kinda gross, even though we all do it.

Anyways, this was hilarious. I laughed my ass off while reading it. No real plot, no great love story, just Bella when she is having private moments or having something between her teeth. I can't believe how normal this all is, it sounds so strange when it's related to her (I mean, she's Twilight's heroine, she's perfect) but it makes her more human and even a little bit more lovable, I think.

Great stuff!
Blondii.623 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
hi, funny as story really good loved it

unlovedAngel.x chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I'm not a big Bella fan either, so I just plain loved this story! EMBARASS BELLA SOME MORE! I'll review! :D This is a very creative idea.
WhiteRabbit-PatchouliChild chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
lol this is grawesome! ive always wanted to know how edward would react to this sort of stuff. i mean no one ever mentions it

ur a really good writer:D
Klutz4Eternity chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
haha so sort of gross, but you follow my story Eternal Solstice, so i felt obligated to check out yours. although this is gross, its still funny!
tayler1117 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
this is about the funniest story i've read in a while. good job!
edwards-crazy-lover chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
dis is totally GROSS..but so wud be true true!
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