|Reviews for lartens gaurdian|
| Marching Band Queen chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Ok, I tried to read it, but I got so frustrated because there is NO capitalization, NO quotation marks, and really, NO punctuation, period (No pun intended). I'm not the only one that gets annoyed by this. There are other grammar freaks in the world other than me. If you want anyone to read it, I think you should fix it.
| Symphony Of Terror chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Didn't you already have this posted before. I have read this before. I really like this story, you just need to go back and capitalize plus add correct punctuation marks and whatnot.
Other than that, awesome.