|Reviews for S W A K|
| Lunardragon33 chapter 3 . 2/9
this is awesome please update soon
| cube913 chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
i adoooore your KxK tics, especially S.W.A.K.!
waaaaaaaaah hoping another chappie will pop out soon x3
| LinkWarriorInGreen chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
This story has got quite a good start to it so far. Please dust off this story and continue? I do agree with another reviewer that you need to elaborate on why Kenshin falls head over heels so quickly but other than that it is really good! Ms. Author, please, do continue!
| Caeria chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
This was a lovely read. It's sad that it looks like its been abandoned.
| Nom de Plume chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
Over the couple months that I have read the beautiful and the ugly range of RK stories, I have come across many magical, beauty&the beast, folk-tales, and such&such stories. But yours... what makes yours different is that you had created your OWN setting for Kenshin's confinement which later on, defines his behavior... that place of pure nothingness that numbs all your senses; I would even venture to say that this kind of torture rivals Hell. Even after reading it, I felt shivers just imagining of staying there for... centuries.
I love the switch to Kenshin's POV at the end there, it certainly gives more dimension to the story and the character. How you had described his slow awareness of the 'outside world' (ahem, Kaoru), gradually shifting from whispers to actual coherent words after going so long without hearing anything at all... I had easily sympathized with him when he finally got to breathe REAL air and was able to have actual, solid human contact. I am surprised that he did not go insane after however many long centuries he was stuck there. Hell, even humans can go wack after just a year and sometimes, even less.
But that being said, while I am not surprised that he seems to be making up for centuries' worth of skin contact with Kaoru, I still find it a bit odd that he is so attached to her already... Yes, I'll acknowledge that he knows much of her life after having spent weeks of listening to her stories which lends some sort of ..er, companionship. But instead of getting the vibe that he is attached to her because she is simply the first being that he has seen/"talked" within years, he acts more like some lusty pervert. Yes, okay he is a male and being stuck in an endless world of no touching does things to the libido but if that is partially the reason for his dismissal of personal space then I think that should be addressed at least. He can find her features pleasing all he wants, but unless you had made groping-girls-he-likes as a natural part of his personality, then I think that should be elaborated more.
Other than that, everything else seems great. Kaoru's thoughts and actions especially stayed true to her real character AND reality. No sane girl would take this kind of scenario well at all, beautiful man or not, and it would make sense that she is thorough in her skepticism of his circumstances. Well-done on the questioning.
Concerning your author's note at the end here... do not doubt your ideas. You obviously have a talent for writing (I would have NEVER guessed that English was not your primary language) and a keen eye for detail (not all writers have this! so take full advantage of it). I may have had some nitpicking about your portrayal of Kenshin's character but I say it in the context of constructive criticism because your story deserves to be as polished and developed as possible, for I definitely see potential in this plot. For the sake of your readers, I hope you return to this story one day.
| Mama Kat chapter 3 . 7/29/2013
I have found that most authors are their own worst critic and you are no exception. I just read these 3 chapters and found no problems with them. I would like to see another chapter if you are so inclined, please?
| Unknown Person chapter 3 . 6/28/2013
I read a drabble from your other series and when you mention SWAK I had to go check it out. Please, oh please update this.
| Grey Wolf4 chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
This so far is a great Kenshin/Kaoru fic this is very well written and you've handled the characters very well. I look forward to further updates.
And don't worry about English not being your first language I have online friends of whom English is not their first language so I understand and am used to it. It sure didn't stop you from writing this fic well!
| Lady Of The Sphinx chapter 3 . 1/8/2013
I'm really interested in seeing this continued. I want to know how Kenshin got in that picture!
| TrianaStyx chapter 3 . 10/29/2012
I love this story & the idea of the seal. I can't wait to know the details and see more of Kenshin/Kaoru! :D
| Tsukihimesama95 chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
Alright, you. You had better post another chapter of this, because it is too damn good to just leave hanging like this! And since it is rated M, your punishment is to make it a lemon, or really heavy, heavy lime. Please do complete it, i want more possessive Kenshin/Battousai action! onegai!
| Jason M. Lee chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
Tease, tease, tease. I do hope you continue this sometime in the future. :) I'm a hopeless sucker for dragon!KenshinxKaoru fics.
| SailorMeowMeow chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
This is an amazing story.
| morningwolf chapter 3 . 6/13/2011
That is AWESOME! update soon please!
| FlutterbyBella chapter 3 . 1/17/2011
ohmagoooooddddd youve GOT TO UPDATE! DD: pleaseeeeeeeeee cause your story is awesome and your a fantastic writer and i really really reaaaaally wanna read more of it! ((: