|Reviews for Bits and Pieces|
| wisecurledqueen chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Wow. This is good. Sad but heartwarming and oh-so-awesome. Thanks!
| The Winds of Chaos chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
you kept refering to the team spliting up sometime in the futrue. I'm just wondering why you think that them spliting is unaviodable? I mean I know that the Teen Titans will eventually no longer be Teens, but that doesn't mean they'll stop being heros or friends. I'm not trying to be rude, just curios about your thought. I love you writing by the way.
| Kryptocow chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Would you mind if I drew "Juliet" into a 2-page comic? I wouldn't change the dialog and I'd of course give you credit.
| Denalien chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Hehehe good ones, well exept for the last one,..the last one was sad :S
But i like it anyways, it goes to my favourites!
| Nightcrawler's Shadow chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Wow, this one was amazing. I really loved the last and second last ones.
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Excellent collection. All of them are great, and some are quite sad... while others are very funny. His real name is D-I-C-K... hilarious!
Keep the good writing.
| Darth Cruel chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Good short stories. Really enjoying reading them. Hope there will be more in the future.
| titanfan45 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Great job on this, I thoroughly enjoyed it. In #1 Raven told Cyborg "if you dint my door,you're fixing it" 'Dint" should be spelled "dent" a very small thing, but as a Autobody Repairman, I've fixed plenty of them. I really looking forward to more of your stories.
| Menamebephil chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
A hoo ra ray and a tiger for me.
Why would I want a tiger? I mean, apart from the fact that it would be the most badass pet ever, it would probably rip my arm off without even meaning to.
That happened once, actually. It's in the Darwin Awards. The woman didn't win one, by virtue of not actually dying, but she got an honourable mention.
I really like these things. They're a fun challenge to write, and I especially enjoyed the ones I actually knew the song of (that would be 1, 2, 5, 10 13, and 17). I derived great amusement from digging up said songs, creating a temporary playlist, and putting them on while reading. Of course, they were a bit too long, but it was fun anyway.
... Can't think. Brain melting. Must...pad...review...
So, how are you?
| 6StringSamurai13 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
YAY, you're back! I was so happy to see that you wrote a new story! As always, I loved the shorts and how they cover such a wide range of emotions and ideas for possible futures. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see more! Oh, and sign online sometime will ya? :-D
| chasingfireflies chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
| Kevorkian chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Ah, it's always good to see new stories from old and favorite authors!
I love the first one. Cats are always a win in my book. They just lend themselves so well to cute situations...
Other than that, there were a few grammatical mistakes ('baring' children or something like that), but not enough to make reading painful or anything. There's a fair amount of OOC-ness, but that tends to happen a lot with good writers - they develop the characters more on their own, so as to write them more effectively. It's a good thing, so don't worry...just don't take it to heart if you get reviews from ignorant readers who complain that the story isn't strictly canon.
I look forward to more of your stories, time permitting. x]
| Jadee chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I could see Raven attending Columbia. I'm applying there myself in the fall and I'd sell my granny to be her roommate.
Apologies, that was tangential.
I very much enjoyed this series of drabble-y bits. My favorite was probably Father of Mine; I've never read that idea before, but I dig the concept of Beast Boy running into a friend of his parents.
I'm glad to see you still active on this site. You're a downright peachy author.
All the best,
| Talex Wyldcard chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Wow. Haven't seen you in a while! I miss your stories something fierce, The Green Files have always been a fave. of mine.
These are nifty, even for little shorts. Your characterization is still really good, and you didn't have alot of spelling errors, or grammar faux pas, so even rusty you still rock!
| RabulaTasa chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I've got to agree with Raven on Romeo and Juliet; that play always did annoy me for relying on the main characters being complete morons. I love the link between her statement in Aftershock and the conversation, by the way.
There are two homonym mistakes that I found: "her temper flairs" (flares) and "have bare his creepy" (bear).