|Reviews for The River God's Wife|
| Will Peterson chapter 1 . 9/4
This love story is really beautiful. Your writing style takes something of an understated approach but it succeeds in capturing the emotions clearly. I also like the details surrounding their daughter - how she can hold her breath for so long and how she likes to hold the water in the bath.
| Starry is here don't freak out chapter 1 . 3/23
This was way too good, I love it
| mary chapter 1 . 1/6
This is really, really beautiful! I especially love the last part about Chihiro working really hard to save Haku. I can really feel how much they care for each other through your words.
| cookienet chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
I love this beautiful story! ...Especially the amount of research poured into it! The name is not lame. It is beautiful and not an uncommon name among the Japanese. I know because my friend shares the same name too! :)
| Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
| CherryFlamingo chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
I kind of wished that you added Chihiro's age because that was the way I felt the story was going. In a way, this seems a bit incomplete and cuts off in the middle, but I still really like the writing style and idea. Once I started reading, I wanted to read more.
| Zelda12343 chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
That was very nice! I loved it!
| Annie chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
This is so amazing!
If you used to write like this, i need to know how you write now! In fact, i'm opening your profile right now, hopefully that's not creepy-sounding.
Have a wonderful day!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
| rayningnight chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Bittersweet. That is the one word that I can think of that sums up such a little novelette. I liked it - though, it's quite sad, considering Chihiro's circumstances.
I wonder... does their child count as a demi-god? Will Mizuko be the one to take over the river when Haku... perishes?
Or will they live on forever once they die, becoming spirit, and going to the Other world?
Hmm... so many possibilities for a sequel for this...
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I don't think it's a strange name
| Luna25684 chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
How about a squeal to this one. Make it where Mizuko fines out that her father is a river dragon god and she comes into her powers? If you could do that I'd like it very much.
| Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Very nice, and I liked the kids name.
| donewiththissite chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
There's such a sweet and tender feeling to this fic. Also, most fics have her waiting for him so the premise was refreshing.