Reviews for The Troubled Air that Rages
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10
I love the foreshadowing of what's going to happen! This is a great standalone story, and I can't even tell where the author switches happen :) Obi-Wan is a complex character, and I really like the way you guys have written him. Thanks for sharing this story, and God bless!
Estora chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
You two write beautifully together. This was really well done - I felt so sorry for Obi-Wan. I always thought Qui-Gon was being a bit of an ass in TPM, and frankly Obi-Wan's concerns were completely justified. But you did make me like Anakin here. I mean, yes, he was a bit of a whiny twit in Episode I, but he was written well here.

Thanks for sharing your talents with us! I'll keep my eye out for any other stories you two might write. XD

~ Estora ~
charie chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Well done guys. You write well together.