|Reviews for What Light Breaks|
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/10
This is a pretty interesting story so far. I like Den's character, particularly the ways he contrasts with Obi-Wan. I can only imagine how he would interact with Anakin, though! They seem like they would either be best friends or instant rivals. I like this older version of Obi-Wan as well, and I still can't tell where you guys shift on who's writing :) Thanks for sharing these chapters, and God bless!
| jmmdh1 chapter 3 . 10/3/2014
I hope you come back to this some day! I love the relationship of Obi-Wan and his Padawan, and that Obi-Wan, while upset about his relationship with Qui-Gon, is not a miserable, broken man over it as in some stories.
| cje24576 chapter 3 . 5/24/2012
This is pretty good! I hope you haven't given up on this! I'd like to know what happens! Please update soon!
| Stephanie Skywalker chapter 3 . 4/23/2010
So are you updating or what? i have to admit, I'm a little curious about how Anakin was injured by a STONE. :)
| Jayiin Mistaya chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
Fantastic story - very complex. Usually, I don't like stories told in flashbacks, but you do a good job with it.
I hope to see more from you.
| KiwiClover chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
Ok, it is official: I love the way you two write! (And might I just say what a lovely collaboration this story is?) Your handle on the characters is spot-on, and the way you use both dialogue and description to move the story along is wonderful. :)
I also love how you hinted that Den reminds Obi-Wan of his old childhood rival (unless I'm way misunderstanding that section, lol)...Den's character is a fantastic OC, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of his 'quirks,' as well as Obi-Wan's relationship with him. :)
Thanks for sharing this story! I'm eagarly awaiting any and all updates!
| imagination theater chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
I love that last part from Den about the fact that Obi-wan still won't admit that Toorga is a sack of slugs. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Anakin and Obi-wan unfolds in this fanfiction, assuming that this mission perhaps leads to something between the two of them other than what is depicted. Hopefully, Obi-wan comes to an understanding with both Qui-gon and Anakin.
| general-joseph-dickson chapter 3 . 1/27/2010
| Velveteenrabbit chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
You two are alive! :] and curse you for updating right before my finals anyways, I wanna see what happens next Is Obi-wan/anakin/Qui-gonn's relationship bad?
| Estora chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
HOMG YAY AN UPDATE!
Great story so far - I'm really enjoying this! Please keep writing, and I wish you guys the best of luck with your collab!
~ Estora ~
| Estora chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
I'm really enjoying this story! I know it's only two chapters in, but it's really caught my attention. Poor Obi-Wan...but I simply ADORE his padawan. I really hope you're going to continue with this story! I can't wait for an update.
Good luck, and please keep writing!
~ Estora ~
| Siriusly Loopy chapter 2 . 5/29/2009
Heehee... annoying initiate with white hair... teehee. I like this! Will it be updated anytime soon?
| Nimloth4th chapter 2 . 5/11/2009
I'm looking forward to know how you're going develop the situation and, obviously, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan's future relationship (really, I'm hoping for some angst and some mush). Go on!
| Trude chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
I admit, I'm not a fan of Obi-Wan, holding him responsible for many things that went wrong with Anakin, so I am curious to see whether you can make me like him or not
| Lily Louisea chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
ahhw! I really like your writing and I like obi wan. He does have a streak for tellng stories:p