|Reviews for Bargains|
| SVJohnson8721 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
| Bastet Goddess chapter 26 . 8/18/2013
This was an amazing piece of work. You really put your heart into this and you should be proud.
| L.L chapter 26 . 7/5/2013
Very cute. Bit fast paced, a little OOC at times, but very, very cute and pleasantly heart-warming. Good job!
| firerock876 chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
13 reviews?! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh h where is he? where r u goblin king?! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/23/2012
You need to mind the personality of the characters, you know? Sarah in the film seems like a somewhat spoilt, childish girl while her father appeared to be an overworked and somewhat weak-willed but still loving man. As for Jareth, I think he's vindictive, childish, and dreadfully bored-but probably not evil. I don't know, that's just how I always saw the characters.
Also could use a bit of proofreading if you ever want to come back and edit the story.
Not a bad fic, though, and a fun read!
| Casperace13 chapter 26 . 10/14/2011
What a sweet story! I loved all the twist as surprise that you ad. Great job.
| lovestoread chapter 26 . 3/4/2011
Simply Adorable! I enjoyed reading this story and it kept my attention from one chapter to the next. It was so cute how Jareth courted her. Thank you for the excellent story, keep up the good work.
| Dontgotaclue88 chapter 26 . 1/28/2011
cute story lol .
| Melissa72 chapter 26 . 9/20/2010
Keep it up Alexa. You have a gift for writing...follow that path...develop the gift God has given you. You will soar if you use it for His good:)
I liked your imagery of "being in his arms." It belies intimacy and closeness. Like it a lot.
I also liked how you incorporated the dancing/ballroom scene as a test for the fae to accept her. Clever.
| juliana chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
What happens next?
| Musicalromancegrl chapter 4 . 5/6/2010
That woman is so evil! Why didn't they just take Sarah away from her?
but atleast Jareth has a nice mom who actually cares about her. this is a really good story! I love it!
| pucky-ucky-wucky-bucky chapter 26 . 4/30/2010
wow. that is the best labyrinth fan fic i have ever read. so fantastic i couldn't stop reading it for long enough to leave a review :D FABULOUS!
| Siriania chapter 26 . 4/16/2010
A wonderful story! I loved it and couldn't stop reading and when I reached the end... I just wished it wouldn't end... hope you make a new love story about Sarah and Jareth!
| CeliaEquus chapter 26 . 4/1/2010
I have to confess to feeling like a bit of a fraud. I've yet to see the movie, but I've read about it on Wikipedia, seen the trailer and selected clips on Youtube, and have been reading fan fiction on here. Now I really, really, REALLY want to see the movie, particularly after reading your story, as I'm eager to see it from the P.O.V of this story... so to speak. Know what I mean? Clearly, you must like/love the movie if you're writing stories about it. What's your favourite part?
| Anonymous chapter 26 . 3/8/2010
Stunning. I fell in love with every one of the characters all over again with each passing chapter. I adored the way you tied everything together (including Merlin, everyone always forgets him... *sob*) and became each character who's eyes you looked through. My only suggestion is the common error of mixing up "lose" and "loose". Lose (looz) is the present-tense of "lost" (it lost one of its o's). Loose (looss... like moose with an L) means lax or not tight. Sorry if my strange ways of remembering spelling insult you, I assure you that my intentions are only to help you overcome a problem that many have, and will continue to, struggle with endlessly. Anyway, good job following through with this divine peace instead of growing bored and giving up half way through, I, among others, could learn alot from you in this field.