Reviews for More then Master and Butler
SnowyFlame chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
so cute! :)
YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Um naw for nothing but they went to sleep in the shower, with tge water running and everything? Should I be concerned of their sanity? It was a short and sweet little fic but not very logical I'm sorry to say...
Sebastianslittlesis chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
TOO SHORT!

Puncuation 100% x5

Imagination 100% x5

Altogether LOOVVEEDD IITT!
ChocolatexXxbubblegum chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
It was okay. Too rushed, though.
CYRA1104 chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
If you'd really want an honest opinion... I'd think that you're trying to portray Ciel like he can act passionate and loving. I didn't really see that part. It's too quick though. Everything that happens... it seems more of a preview of a dream than the whole itself. You should really take more words and don't stress yourself over the sex part. That's fine. Though making Sebastian or Ciel a bit more sadistic will give the story more... "oomph"? ;"3 -BCAP8816 3 un
AWhimsicalLaugh chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
that was really good. it was really straight and to the point with no complex plots or useless rambling. i like stories like this and think you should have more than 3 stories published
Amewica chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Aw Fluffy! I really enjoyed it! Amazing!

10 times better then my fanfic!
anon azure chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
it's a little short

but fluffly sweet
inmemoryoftheMasterRapper chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Too rushed.

Nuff said.
Futaba Hotaru chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
The style is hasty and is streesing, it is better if you, write it in a slower style, and take more words.