|Reviews for Brothers and Sisters|
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2016
I couldn't go through this whole story.. Too many POVs, too much happening, no details and the way they talk is cringeworthy.. Maybe you have a good story there but that was not a way to tell it.
| irelandk chapter 45 . 6/8/2016
| jk chapter 33 . 4/30/2016
funny how Edward was sooo happy with Tanya, loved Tanya, wanted Tanya to move in, wanted to marry tanay casue he LOVED HER and was sooo happy...bella was noting, bella was not competition, bella was not the woman he loved, bella was not the one he wanted to spend his life with...but now...two years later hes only letting bella go because SHE has moved on..? ummmmmm
that's bullshit right there cause he had already moved on...and whats with the no sex shit? hes a nasty whore and we don't give a fuck if he fucks Tanya cause he fucks everyone else! you think that will make us like him more? its not believable! you don't go from fucking anything and everything to I want to wait till marriage...its just not believable
| jk chapter 29 . 4/29/2016
alright...Edward said that bella is not competition...that he doesn't love bella that he loves Tanya. bellas been out for over a year and hes been with tanwhore this whole time. He has now asked Tanya to move in with him...done deal lets wrap this bullshit up. Bella said she was gonna let him go a YEAR AGO...LET HIM GO not pine away for him...fuck that. whats to fucking pine away for? and where the fuck is bellas new man? a man she can love hmmmm? why does the nastiest whore get a woman he can love but you don't give bella anyone? wtf?
| jk chapter 28 . 4/29/2016
shes letting go of whoreward? THANK FUCKING GOD...did you see bella trying to get full custody when Edward came back from drugging and whoring it up? noooooooo. and I hate this Edward anyway he can fucking die...seriously
bella and jake!
| jk chapter 26 . 4/29/2016
LOL, bella is seriously fucking stupid.
And you are stupid to believe that theres enough drugs floating around a juvinille detention center to keep bella high and drunk the whole time she was there...ive been in places like that and theres is simply not that much access. And shes out one day and she invites drug dealers over to someone else house while shes watching her kid for the first time? seriously?
she should just kill herself cause shes fucking worthless...theres just nothing to her. I have known drug addicts ALL my life. Alcoholics, herion addicts, coke, meth you name it...and they just don't act like bella does...theres nothing to bella just poor me poor me, need to be numb, cant deal with ANYTHING...its really fucking pathetic. She should just kill herself...seriously. I hate Tanya, always will but it seems shes better for whoreward in this story. Edwards fucking nasty anyway so really who gives a fuck who hes with? hes fucked everyone else he might as well fuck Tanya to, whats the difference?
| jk chapter 24 . 4/29/2016
lol its so obviously a accident, you trying to get everyone to believe that all those cops and investigators are fucking stupid...is well...fucking stupid
| jk chapter 21 . 4/29/2016
so bella is a dumbass and oes out and gets fucked up...and when she comes back...Edward KNOWS he cant take a mother away from her baby... LOL and please tell me what judge anywhere would LET Edward take that baby?
I wonder just how he thought he would take the kid away...with all that porn money he didn't make? LOL
| jk chapter 19 . 4/29/2016
lol her kids been kidnapped and does she give a description of the woman that took her and rally the troops to get out there to look for her? nope...she runs away and drinks
| jk chapter 18 . 4/29/2016
so bella made it all the way home without telling anyone what the girl looked like?
whilst the boys are arguing about who took the baby with the horrible name...shes just sitting there...LOL letting them talk about how james may have taken her...and bella doesn't even offer up the info...could you write dumber characters maybe? I don't think you could if you tried!
| jk chapter 17 . 4/29/2016
of course I can forgive you Edward! LOL bellas a stupid little victim
| jk chapter 16 . 4/29/2016
Edwards going to rehab and daddys paying for it? and I thought Edward said he was a highly paid porn star...LOL what a fucking joke. I hope he has aids
| jk chapter 15 . 4/29/2016
sooooo...bella has a crush on Edward...but knows hes a nasty skank...fucks him without a condom anyway, cause that's the kind of stupid bitch she is, then he tells her thanks for the sex call me if your pregnant I can give you a number for a abortion clinic...oh and you can pay for it, then he ignores her for two months whilst having every whore in forks suck on his diseased dick, then he tells her he wants her and the baby and that he wont let her down, she goes to him only to find him fucking lauran doggy style, then he disappears, then shows up 7 months later at the hospital when shes giving birth and its all good between them? she loves him? she wants them to be a family?
are you for fucking real with this stupid shit?
| jk chapter 13 . 4/29/2016
LOL what is this Walmart cheap bastard bullshit? Edward just said that he was a "highly paid porn star" LOL yaaaa we all knew that was bullshit when he thought it...now you have him getting the mother of his child a 50 cent card and a dollars worth of tootsie pops...LOL highly paid whore..my ass
| jk chapter 12 . 4/29/2016
wow just when I thought bella couldn't get any worse she promises her brother her kid then takes it back yelling at him like that? what a fucking cunt! you don't do shit like that...and Edwards a porn star? LOL you mean disgusting used up whore right?
I hope he has aids