Thank you for this fic! You are amazing

Men this is only trash, a horrible shipp and horrible history, please no wirte more

So everyone cares for Kenobi more than Anakin even the twins? How many times is this gonna be a thing?

This is great! Can’t wait to see where you take them!

I liked the peak into Anakin and Obi-Wan raising Luke and Leia. I’m glad Anakin’s return wasn’t too easy. Your description of Anakin figuring out how to beat Sideous by analyzing how he was beaten in the past was intriguing. The balance you set between forgiving Anakin’s crimes and holding him accountable was also appreciated. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Your take on Anakin going dark side while still trying to cling to Padme and Obi-Wan felt both chilling and gripping. Anakin as Vader believing he could fix things and somehow win them over despite having just helped destroy much of what they dedicated their lives to, was sadly in character. I didn’t expect Padme to give up on Anakin before Obi-Wan, but as this Padme was forced to watch Vader’s treatment of Obi-Wan her reaction is understandable. It’s a shame he couldn’t see how selfish he was being until Padme died. Thanks for sharing this story with us. Now I’m off to read part two.

Boring and predictable.

-Redemption/ Remembered for what you have done Right /Copy ThatBail-Breha /adopt “their baby daughter…. Happy Epilogue

-Exceptional Writing-love the little Luke &Leia- and the dialogue -LOL-between themand of course theinfamous OWK ~lineThat-Weapon ~Is ~Your ~Life

—applause! Well Done ! -Worthy SW- BATTLE! And very well thought out

**Love the play on lines frommovies- and the correlation regarding armor from Anakin;)
LOLreprimand from Obi during battlenice foot tap annoying from
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You join many of us regarding -Qui-Shmispending the night togetherenjoy the much needed talks betweenO &. A—
Along the clever wit from obi And Banter with both- Breha is a sweetstrong presenceSkywalker Stare ! (VentrisDeserve has nothing to do with anythingsparring of words is great between Anakin and V—
-Yoda- perhaps is in need of-mind probe from obi wan

-the Little Skywalker’s are described so wellTime For A Drink Before Bed”! No Doubt! Damn Right ! Obi Wan

—Excellent Chapter-5!

—Authoris /truly /a -gifted /writer -and -this -story -Affirmed- and confirms…. You write and balance the characters we know —but also bring —your own personal imprint… well done