Reviews for The Pieces
iWriteJacoBella2 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
That was sooo sweet. Loved it. The moral was freaking amazing.
imlost424 chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Great story :)
PaperArtist chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Wow, very very appropriate. It's always so refreshing to read good writing with accurate characterizations.

... I'm wondering... There's this one part in Eclipse where Edward and Jake are talking (when Bella is in the sleeping bag) and Jake said that he'd had a "plan" I've always wondered what the plan was.. I can guess of course, but it would be neat to see it in a story and you did such a great job with this that I wonder if you'd thought of doing any more with the two of them.. perhaps from his perspective with his "plan".. supposedly it was well thought out. ;)
alittlefaithinme2 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
aw i liked it!
The Predatory Wasp chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
aaw. wow, this was really good!
CoffeeQueen chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Ah! :) That was a great story. I loved the plot and the hidden meaning behind it all. Great job!
the.funnie chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
oh no!

did you really stop writing this story?

i mean, the whole meaning it's so beautiful... you could go on with it!

anyway, the nicest Twilight one-shot i've read until now! congrats ;D
XxXLuvTheOriginalsXxX chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
AW I loved it. It should have been in the book your so talented.
An Ocean Under A Thousand Suns chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Great job i really liked and i don't even like Jake, great job
sprinkledwithpearls chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Aw that was cute.

Very cute, actually. I like these one-shots. Ever consider a chapter by chapter story? You'd probably be great at one.

Great job.
A-Silent-Rebel chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
It seems a little overly serious for Jake, but I love it. Good job. :)
ForbiddenFruit420 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
soo amazing

real good
Jackson Rathbone's Girl chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
That is so sweet! It's stories like this that make me love Jacob!