|Reviews for Jasper's Golden Moon|
| anushca chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Just perfect. I own you a more detailed comment and I will! But I could not pass saying it, for the moment.
| eysim chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
I just wanted to say that I truly enjoyed this chapter. I think that you write Jasper's POV exactly as I hear it in my head based on his character in this story. It is not so "new" or outrageous, since we hear a lot of his thoughts through his conversations and dialogue with Bella. I liked finding out how and why he new that La Push was a safe place for Bella to be if he needed to go hunt, etc., that she would be protected there.
Now to go back to the beginning and the more important facets of Jasper's thinking which were revealed. I liked hearing about his thoughts following their amazing mutual revelations to each other, while she slept, but more importantly hearing how convinced he was that leaving Alice was what he must do, that it was the right thing to do. It made is even more understandable and "real" as to how and why is so in love with Bella and why she is so right for him. It gave me more confidence that they will be together. Keep more of his POV coming, but not at the expense of coinuing forward with the story.
| In Snake Skin chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
that is awesome
keep up the good work :D
Jasper's Soul Mate
| BaconButt chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Jasper always exceeded my expectations!
I will be waiting for more yummy JPOV goodness!
| TwilightLurker chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
This was wonderful. Jasper's viewpoint rounds out an already fabulous story. I loved seeing the strength of his convictions regarding his relationship with Bella. Thanks for posting this!
| Britt-a-water chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I loveed the Jasper POV ! Please write the whole thing from his POV that would be heaven!
| tigger5600 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
really awesome! nice to see his side of things! :)
| Keehl-River chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I loved Jaspers point of veiw almost as much as I did Bellas.
| Androma chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I haven't read it yet since I haven't read the first 30 chapters of Golden Moon entirely but am I too... well... bold if I ask you as soon as now if I can translate it in French when I come to this 30th chapter? Well I think I'm gonna become your official translator soon! XD
| Nerd-With-A-Computer chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Aw, no lemon!
Please post more soon!
| JezabelJo chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I love your Jasper, He's not as inscent in his mind as i thought he would be it, good suprise tho. Can't wait for more.
| tiffanybanks24aol.com chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
m yummy lustful jasper!
| Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Jasper definitely lived up to expectations. I love the way you got into his head. I cant wait for more of Japser's POV. Great job and congrats, Kathy
| the.hippie.82 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
That was awesome. I've been following Golden Moon from the beginning and I'm totally hooked. This new bit from JPOV is amazing. I'm in love with your Jasper. Just out of curiosity (and I apologize if you've already answered this and I missed it somewhere), is there any chance of you doing the rest of the story JPOV? I for one would love to be in his head for everything else that has happened between the two of them.
Either way, that was a great chapter and I'm looking forward to the rest of this piece.
| jbluvs2sing chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Great job. You did well getting into Jasper's head.