Reviews for Jasper's Golden Moon
ebonyeyez1 chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
Awesome chapter!
anushca chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
Hey! Welcome back! I was thinking on you these past days, but I imagined you were enjoying some well deserved vacacions ;-) I really liked this chapter. I was aching to see this man mind and he did not dissapointed me! You made a complex portrait of a man, I mean I knew he was like that from his actions, but to actually hear how he think...Just great! I am here waiting patiently for the rest, of course! Thank you.
Calliope Jones chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
I think I might have borrowed Jasper. Not Sorry. P

I really love seeing what he's thinking! It's wonderful. Especially since he's not nearly as innocent as Bella.

I can't wait to see the rest!
anythingzombie chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
It's so homey reading your writing again.

Sigh. You are the best ever.

As was this chapter. I am pumped for more.
chst chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
It is good!

First, he was a bit rougher than I expected, but than I understood that I am more used to read in Edward's POV, or in Jasper's POV that are to much Edwardian, than of reading the POV of a Jasper who isn't Edward. What I mean is that you made Jasper being himself, and not think like Edward would. And that was good! If you make a BxJ fanfic, then don't turn Jasper into Edward, stealing his lines and so on, because then it could as well be an BxE story. Not that I don't like them. I just don't like hypocrisy ;)
Winged and Dangerous chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I loved it! I can't wait for you to put up more chapters! : )
Lucky42001 chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I loved Golden Moon and I am so excited you are doing Jasper's POV! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming!
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
M, Jasper's so yummy, and I love seeing the story from his M rated point of view. Hope you do a few more of these.
darkshadow chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Great chapter :D
Ughhh chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
ok...luv ur story...culd u do the chapter where jasper cals bella a little girl and presses her into him cuz she won't listen...I love that chapter and i want to hear it form jasper's POV...anyway ur an awsum author and i hope u find an idea 4 a sequel at some time...and if u ever publish a book...i wuld absolutely LOVVEE to read it.
henbane chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
WOW - I LOVED this chapter from JPOV! Can't wait for more ...
HPFangirl71 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I love this extra chapter, just like in Midnight Sun it is so wonderful to have the vampire viewpoint, you write so wonderfully and I could see Jasper feeling and thinking such things! Great extra chapter, you should do some more and cant wait for you Mike story!
Eveil Woman chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
If I had to pick something apart I would question- Jasper having been born when he was would he not me a little more refined old fashioned in his way of thinking. However that being said he has been the same age for a very long time I guess the mind would adapted to more current ways of thinking. Great job and I look forward to more from you!
MissAnneFromBelgium chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Jasper is totally what i expect...thanks for this chapter...
Mamie Cullen chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I like the Jasper's voice in your words...

He's so genuine !

We can understand how he's felt and what he want and desire. (under the shower... hum!)...

And every difference with way of Edward ! (And for ever, because of you, I prefer Jasper !)

I'll wish and hope you'll wrote a lot of other chapters by Jasper POV...

Seattle (with whales) or the cooking lesson, for example. Or... all chapters ?

I can wait... (I think...) but... please ?

After the end of your story ?

And... sorry, I'm ever a French girl with a bad english
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