|Reviews for Jasper's Golden Moon|
| MizzKat chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
I realy enjoyed this. Great work. I hope you continue this later on. Jasper's point of view is refreshing.
| Miss-Almond chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
luv Jaspers mind!
You did a great job. Your so my favorite author on this site!
| AlbertaGirl88 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Oh wow. I love this version of the chapter. And golden moon as well of course. You are an amazing author. Your story has me completely captivated. I can't wait for more.
| vivid.daydreamer chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
This is really good, although his head is a lot less... polite... than his verbal communication it gave really good insight into his side of the story and was a really good perception of the character u hav developed from Meyer's work. Thoroughly enjoyed reading his side to the story, and learning how strongly he feels for bella emotionally and physically. I am also curious about whether Edward will return at some point during ur story cause that would make for great conflict. So although ur prologue doesn't hint to that as an ending, it still seems an exciting posibility as well as ur other planned drama.
| The Original Pronglet chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Jasper is awesome...that pretty much sums it up!
| rickiebeaumont chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
I loved this out take... Jasper's point of view is awsome, I always knew he was a nasty little boy lol... I wouldn't mind a few other chapters from his point of view either... thanks again for this story.
| Cera chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Gotta say LOVE Golden Moon and LOVE your take on Jasper!
| Kamaria Aislynn chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Jasper is awesome and I love getting a little peak into his thoughts!
| beignet chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Love, Love, Love him!
| Slywolf9 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Fantastic! I loved it loved it! Jasper POV rocks! :] It's good to see his side of the story too, to know what happens in the in between times. :] And oh my, Bella and her sleep talking! Haha.
I am definitely excited for the next chapter of this, whenever it shall be. :] It was lovely and well written-I love the characterization of Jasper. :] LOVED IT!
| Slam2k chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
it's nice to hear Jasper's side of the story ... of course all his sides are nice (front side, back side, err.. you get the point)
| plumerialost chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
I LOVE that you're doing some Jasper POV! Great job! olfactory obsessionhaha love it! :)
| SolarDiamond chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
He most definitely lived up to my expectations! You write him very well :)
| firstsong1 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Awesome! It was so great to get to know your Jasper a bit better...to see how he thinks. You did a great job with this and it made me fall in love with GM even more. I was stoked to see the 'to be continued'. I will definitely look forward to more of Jasper's head! :-)
| lovedwardalways chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
oh yeah that was awesome I just had to come read this before I read the new chapter. dang the thoughts and feeling jasper was having were hot turning into a teenage boy with all of his hormones and needing relief after spending the day with bella thinkingof her undressing infront of him and her moans with his name on her lips yeah that was just spectacular.