Reviews for City of Love
Pia chapter 7 . 5/21/2011
This is really good! But also I guess I didn't like that jace was just there in his room moping and all.. I think he would be off looking for clary right away
LorrLu chapter 8 . 1/24/2011
PLEASE write more please please plesssssssssaseee
suse chapter 8 . 12/4/2010
nice
Fullmetal Assassin chapter 8 . 9/23/2010
OOH! PLEASE CONTINUE!
TealPrincess chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
ur a incredably good writer and i hav enjoyed these 2 chapters so far!

well done xox
aly e chapter 2 . 5/28/2010
Well, I guess the honeymoon is over, huh?

thanks, Aly
aly e chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Ugh, I just can't get enough of these two . . . thank you for writing this! So far I love it - you have kept them in character!

Don't ya just love that Jace - Jeez, what a honey!

thank you for giving me the "more" I need after finishing the series . . .

Aly
hollylaura chapter 8 . 4/8/2010
OMG...!

... you have done it again, you are simply amazing elana

please dont stop writting you have a gift, i love this chapter it really on one my favourites! this whole little short story is

love it cant wait for the next instalment
Naru-hime-chan chapter 8 . 4/8/2010
i really like the direction of this story

BUT it's starting to lose my interest due

to the chapters being way to short and not

very detailed, don't get me wrong i love

this story, i just thought to tell you

thank you,

Becca-Boo-21
jessie chapter 7 . 3/12/2010
i really like it but plz keep writing fast i want to no what happens next
KK Renee chapter 7 . 3/5/2010
I love this story! It's really great, honestly. Update soon, please!
hollylaura chapter 7 . 1/24/2010
OMG... your my faveourite writer.

you really capture the emotion a young boy in love would be feeling if he lost the most vauable thing in his life!

love this chapter. had tears in my eyes

best writer

keep on writing please
Rose chapter 7 . 1/24/2010
I read the first seven cahpters and their amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter !
Rue Dumaine chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
I like your vocabulary but no one say whilst and it sotr of ruins the mood.
kimmitwilight chapter 7 . 1/22/2010
like dis story alot! keep writing:)
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