Reviews for Partners
SarcasticallySatyrical chapter 6 . 9/13
Im just gonna leave this review here. This was one of the first fics that i ever read, so thank you for bringing me into a fandom that has provided me with so much joy over the years.
Helscreama chapter 16 . 9/6
Fantastic read!
Epeefencer chapter 13 . 8/23
Voldy escaped due to poor spell choice. Harry should have cast a reductor or bone exploding hex instead the spell you chose. Harry could have ended the war if he had used a different more destructive spell.
ruth hammond chapter 13 . 8/9
Once again I need to tell you what a wonderful story you have going, I also nee to tell you how much I need to thank you for your author,s notes. They add so much to those of us who do not speak "English speak", in this case the use of CV, I spent some time trying to figure it out and gave up and hoped you were on your usual ball and did the AN trick and it got a really big smile out of me...!
Question...Where do we find the story, [The Skitterleap] and who is the author?
Epeefencer chapter 1 . 7/29
Okay, SkeleGro is used to regrow bones, not fix breaks. There are spells for that. I am a little surprised that you have Daphne have black hair as she is usually portrayed as a blonde, but as far as I can remember it isn't specified in canon. I do find it hard to believe that one of the Hallows could be burned by a muggle.
Silky Button chapter 16 . 7/21
Oh my heartstrings!

I truly enjoyed your twist on the HP/DG stories that I've come to love above the rest
thank you for sharing
ruth hammond chapter 8 . 7/21
Can't remember if I told you before, really like your recommendations for further reading and new authors that I have not read before, but then you screwed up with your recommendation for this chapter, I have read most if not all of Old Crow's writings...really enjoyed them all...!
If this were reality, I would be really worried about the teens, but then I think I would be right there with them.
Back to the story...
Silky Button chapter 12 . 7/20
Haha just saw the A/N note about the Draco still in Hogwarts thing that I last commented on.
Too funny

anyways, loving where this is going
Silky Button chapter 11 . 7/19
The murder of young Boot by Draco was... odd.
If only because it is then ignored... even though Aurors investigated.

If only because Boot is (most likely) family to one of the big 15 you keep mentioning...
How is Draco not in chains? But rather strutting around Hogwarts?

Beyond that, pretty great story so far.
Ckg833 chapter 8 . 6/22
Great Story
gginsc chapter 16 . 5/30
Good story.
Darknessdawns chapter 16 . 5/12
This was an absolutely wonderful story that actually left me teary eyed. I wasn't surprised that the whole story was within the eulogy but the ending with Daphne reunited with Harry was unexpectedly perfect. Now as to the story, I honestly wasn't expecting the entire thing to be from Daphne's point of view. It was definitely a different take on things and I did enjoy it. I also really liked that there was a bit of an epilogue within the eulogy as well. Another thing I really enjoyed about this was that over half of it really focused on the relationships of the characters, the family that formed around Harry and Daphne and the love that they shared. The second half was also nicely done with its focus on ending the war. I like that the feelings about the family were still prevalent even as the war heated up.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/12
Kyria Greene chapter 16 . 3/26
Beautiful story! Love your Daphne!
kukuhimanpr chapter 1 . 2/5
harry using the moniker sneering snivellus is too out of character imo. in canon harry is horrified by what his father and the marauders has done to severus, and while he hate severus for blindly hating harry, harry never use the snivellus moniker because he somewhat symphatized with severus as they're both victims of bullying.

yeah, this fic's harry seems to resemble the canon, but veers off gradually towards au version. but just the fact that harry instantly directly mock severus by using the snivellus moniker in his casual banter with daphne is just so against his basic character personality, that it turns off my interest in reading further. bully symphatizer harry! is a total jerk.
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