Who cares?

I almost finished the story, despite some not very good parts, but honestly, I can’t. This is pure crap how ypu have the characters acting. You sir are a fucktard. I suspect you come from a long line of fucktards and, most likely, will continue to live down to that title.

Build a bridge?
The appropriate response should have been: Get the fuck out of my house you cunt!

lame, you give every reason in the world to hate the man, but since it's just Harry he wronged then he, and we, should just get over it.

Amelia should know what first-degree murder is
Cornell Law "characteristics of first-degree murder include:
Premeditation: The murder must be planned and purposeful, rather than happening in the heat of the moment.
Intent: The murderer must have intended to kill the victim.
Malice aforethought: The murderer must have had a general disregard for human life."

It's incredibly stupid to show that a Deathly Hallow can be burnt so easily let alone be seen by a muggle.

So terry boot is killed and Lord Boot has no response? Odd.

And finally Harry realizes he needs to deal with Tom directly….

Strange plot decisions.

Odd story. Some interesting ideas, but bland characters and repetitive scenarios undermine any narrative progress. Single POV also reinforces how reactive your characters are when it comes to dealing with Riddle and Dumbledore.

A truly excellent story, i loved it.

Some errors. Feel like it jumped and was jumbled in places.

How was Malfoy not in Azkaban with his father for killing Terry Boot?

Really, Spiro Agnew? That’s reaching for political naming! LOL!

That ought to motivate them to act quickly!

a great tale and great finish. well don

I would like to thank you for one of the finest HP stoies I have ever read. It was superb from beginning to end and what astory it was, Again, zThank You