Reviews for Partners
suziq968 chapter 7 . 10/15/2020
Ironic, wardog apparently started then abandoned the story and ptsf picked it up and made it worse according to comments on dlp, including ptsp's comments so the shifting method will live on in yours unless it's available in those first two chapters in ff
K chapter 16 . 10/10/2020
Beautiful, purely simply Beautiful. Thankyou.
maateus97 chapter 11 . 10/7/2020
wasn't draco arrested for the use of the killing curse in the other chapter?
kcrump88 chapter 16 . 9/25/2020
Wow! Truly a wonderful story and one that I will be saving to read again in the future. I share your impatience fo poorly written and structured stories and have enjoyed your writing. Well done!
kcrump88 chapter 14 . 9/25/2020
I certainly never expected to see Roland Deshain show up and didn't didn't even get it until he asked Harry how he killed. I love the character though. Spot on!
Andrew4815 chapter 6 . 9/13/2020
I feel like looking down on people cause they aren't part of the 15 is just as bad as looking down on non-muggleborns. Frankly, with the MacMillans and Abbotts, they would have a 3/4ths supermajority. If they want to cut all ties with the Jones and Boots they can.
tomascatts chapter 11 . 8/29/2020
Wasn't Malfoy arrested for casting the killing curse on Terry Boot.
tomascatts chapter 7 . 8/28/2020
Yes! Thanks for fixing JKR's fuck up and giving Neville justice!
Just William chapter 16 . 7/9/2020
Good story, well written, much better - in my opinion, than To Stand Against The Darkness.
udm17 chapter 16 . 6/16/2020
Beautifully written. Stories like these make me want to come back for more.
ForgottenPrince chapter 16 . 6/13/2020
Well, that was a sad ending, but a good one. Great story.

Best regards,
renextronex chapter 1 . 5/16/2020
I'm not a brit but I'm pretty sure you just don't call acquaintances by the first name in England, especially if you have a reason to be wary of them so Harry and Daphne calling each other by the first name from the beginning are more than a little weird to me, also all the familiarity and the whole "Five more minutes" banter, is like they are childhood friends, it is what someone no familiar with the source material would think. Why are they so open with each other? Harry is not canonically an open person and after the whole shitshow at the beginning, you would think that Daphne isn't either. The whole scene of their initial interactions makes no sense, Harry should have been panicking and demanding explanations, Daphne should have been wary and tentative while dealing with him

This fic was recommended to me because supposedly Harry and Daphne make up for each other shortcomings but with the unnatural way their interactions are bein dealt with IDK if I'm really interested

Also, a family motto is likely to be written in Latin
odonnellzoo99 chapter 16 . 5/16/2020
Just as good the second time or maybe better.
Thank you for sharing your creativity.
CarolWim chapter 16 . 5/15/2020
That was one of a hell of a story, dear
author. Even after more then 20 times reading it (again and again), I'm more than impressed ... humbled as you will. This is truly a masterpiece. Thank you so much.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 1 . 5/14/2020
I’m glad found this story again. I Favorited it this time so won’t lose it.
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