Reviews for Clear Waters
chrysalis escapist chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
WOW!

I know that feeling, and I loved the way you captured it.

So much about this I loved, the 'rather comfortable state of melancholy (denial)' for example, and the not wanting to return to reality, and thinking that it will take forever. I'm so amazed how much you can say with so few words.

This was incredibly effective standing so alone as a paragraph 'The loss.'

And then it's heightened by feeling the loss of Keller's presence immediately.

So well written!
sobz chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
brilliant

now stop with the teasing alreadu and get them together!lol

need more