Hmm, what hypocrisy. So it’s like being a militarized killer, fighting and performing dangerous tasks - you’re old enough, but still a child for sex. You, the author, either put on some underpants or take off the cross!

I wrote a short ending to “That Look”, taking place during Chapter 61 (instead of the cliff hanger on chap 70)
It’s not the same as TLOTL himself, but I’ve worked hard to make sure it’s true to the tone and established artistic quality (regardless of brevity):

s/14410153/1/That-Look-An-Ending

Hope you enjoy!

I wrote a short ending to “That Look”, taking place prematurely during Chapter 61
It’s not the same as TLOTL himself, but I’ve worked hard to make it true to the tone and established artistic quality (even though it is short):

s/14410153/1/That-Look-An-Ending

Hope you enjoy!

I wrote a short ending to “That Look”
It’s not the same as TLOTL, but effort has been made to make it true to the tone and artistic quality (even though it is short):

s/14410153/1/That-Look-An-Ending

Hope you enjoy!

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Yep down hill from here... honest anko should jion on trip. Push her to s rank

Next chap time skip and again show why training trip is the dumbest plot in the whole world it dumb and lazy.. sorry for the rant

Hello, fellow pedos. I’m Gina Gail Barron-Goodman. I’m 61 years old and I live at 126 Ambrosia Lane, Heath, Texas 75032. I sell child pornography, ten videos for one dollar. Method of payment is via PAYPAL. You can choose any video you want in the catalog that will be provided to you. I have pedomom, rape, anal, oral, etc. And if you enter my Telegram account saying that you come from fanfiction, I will give away pedophile photos of little kids naked and having sex for free.

Visit my Telegram channel: Master777vip0000

You can email me at ginabar at gmail dot com.

This naruto is such a brat, heck even main timeline naruto wouldn't act in such a way.

Ah, completely mishandled naruto story where he's nothing but a underage cuck and anko is a slut who doesn;t care who she hurts. tried reading this years ago and just now re-encountered it while looking for new stories to read.

I did not miss it but figured I would leave a comment for old times sake. To remind myself why I avoid stories like this ever since.

Good story. Please update!

Are you ever going to finish the story? This is my favorite one of yours. I’ve read it about 10 times in the past decade. I really hope you do finish it. I really want to see the end. finally they were getting together that pairing is one of my absolute favorites, and there are so few of them with anko

Absolutely fucking retarded

I don't know if you planned for this but Naruto to me is just acting as a petulant child that's assumes the world runs by his rules

wtf are these comments