Reviews for That Look
corjca1 chapter 5 . 6/15/2021
nice teachers i wonder what they do if his parents were there they would cry like babies hell is too good for those teachers
corjca1 chapter 4 . 6/15/2021
what they are doing an inocent blessed child he didnt ask to be burden with 9 tailed fox they are the real demons not an inocent child of god when they die they will answer for there evil cruelty to an orphon child inocent of any crime or sin
HoboBaby chapter 1 . 4/9/2021
I hate the fact Naruto is a cuck. You really made him fall in love with a woman who fucked his teacher, and half the village. Why would we want to read a story of Naruto being a pussy? Would be better if you didn't finish this story.
Seamarvel19 chapter 70 . 4/8/2021
It really annoys me that anko is just a slut in this fic and it took her years to get her act together but other then that it's a really good fic
Guest chapter 69 . 4/6/2021
Itachi: "A ninja should not seek revenge"
Also Itachi: *plans for Sasuke to kill him*
Guest chapter 60 . 4/6/2021
1. 2 million ryo to prevent a war is nothing considering that Asuma's bounty is 35 million ryo just because he was one of the guardian shinobi 12

2. Jacking off with a salmon would honestly be slightly pleasing, you'd be surprised

3. It's funny how you respond to being called arrogant and egotistical by being arrogant and egotistical
Guest chapter 57 . 4/6/2021
Tobirama invented the Shadow Clone Jutsu, and it's not forbidden. The Multi-Shadow Clone Jutsu is forbidden but nor the normal one.
Guest chapter 55 . 4/6/2021
You don't need senjutsu for the hiraishin, and Minato doesn't have a bloodline.
Guest chapter 28 . 4/6/2021
It's a shame that Anko is portrayed as a slut in this fanfic (and in most fanfics), in the official data book she is stated to take love and relationships very seriously.
Fetysh chapter 40 . 4/4/2021
Man, I cannot help but despise Naruto here. That is rather disgusting treatment of a woman who's 12 years older than he is, and repeatedly told him years ago that no, she was not going to marry a preteen while she was 24.
Now he thinks because he's 15 and she's 28 that that's changed? That she's required to stay with him? He's is one jealous little bastard and I would kick him to the curb as fast as I could if I was Anko.
Naruto is a child and he's acting like a child, but using far harsher things to someone that is much more of a mother figure than anything else. The way Anko initially treated him was protecting him, helping give him better shelter, helping feed him, teaching him, and playing with him. And did it for ~4 years.
That's called a mother. That's what they do. Naruto has an Oedipus complex, and the only reason it's not technically one is because they're not related.
Anko isn't blameless here at all, but her only blame is that she hasn't rebuffed harder. And frankly, that's because she'd feel guilty about it, being his first friend/mother in his entire life. She let herself get to close, but he has NO right to just demand that she suddenly turn into a nun for him, and damn sure has no fucking right to humiliate her like that.
Guest chapter 70 . 3/25/2021
Great fic I really loved it. The only disappointment is that it isn't finished story. And like few are saying it isn't cuckhold maybe it gives a little bit cuckold vibe but it's not.
I feel little sad for naruto but he was wrong.
Also I wanted to beat he's not that much good-looking he's attitude rub me the wrong way in this fic.

Author made anko promiscuous and they are dangerous than worse they can't be with one man or two only those who have steel of a heart can dare to love them...i want to write more about this fic but it to much troublesome.
So I will end with the things I don't like-...anko sleeping with more than half of the village men's specifically kakashi.( their we get cuchold vibe ).
- kakashi attitude and that he looks goods..for me he look like a pussy.
James chapter 61 . 3/10/2021
This is still one of my favorite fics, even though it'll most likely never be finished i still enjoy rereading it every once in a while.

And when I get to this chapter I swear this end joke gets me every time! XD

I love your setups, this and the way you ended the chapter where there playing 10 questions. Are my favorites.
BearGlitch chapter 17 . 2/12/2021
dropped, this cuckoldry is not for me dude
Loghain Mac Tir chapter 27 . 1/31/2021
DANG do I feel bad about Sasuke getting killed by Orochimaru, but I have to say that so far this story has been spectacular. You do a great job of portraying the characters as human, faults and all.
Fictional Fanatic from Fimfic chapter 57 . 1/25/2021
So... don't poison users usally carry antidotes on them? I feel Shikamaru of all people would think of checking Kankuro for one...
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