Reviews for How Dee Quit Smoking
KissFromABlackRose chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Haha, the last lines were the best! :D I mean, Dee already was a hornball before, and now it's even worse? Oh dear. xD
demon2091 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Dude! That's a great way to quit smoking! I should try that on my girlfriend... :)
Painfuljoy chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
really awesome story! I love how you had such a creative idea. For formal critic i like how you varied your sentence lengths usually when i write the sentences are almost all the same length but im just a real rookie. anyway, great fantastic story.
Pulele Hua chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Awesome! poor Ryo...well not really. He gets hot sex from Dee. _
SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
I laughed so hard... XD

That is one way to get your lover to break the habit!

And just to clarify for poor Ryo: NO, YOU DON'T WANNA BREAK THAT HABIT! XD
Jamaican Princess Rocquellan chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
hahahaha

that was great. I love it xD
InsanityRelapse chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I do believe that is the best way to kick off cigs that I've ever read! XD Bloody Brilliant!