Reviews for A New Team Revised
YeagerMeister31 chapter 12 . 12/26/2016
well this was quite extreme can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 11 . 12/26/2016
interesting chapter and funny in moments SasHina is revolting but oh well there both pathetic excrement anywayz
YeagerMeister31 chapter 10 . 12/26/2016
well this was a fun chapter can't wait for more and can't wait for NaruSakuIno to get more closer plus add in Anko and u have a team of badasses as for Sasgay and Emo Hinata with Scumtachi and u have an interesting story
YeagerMeister31 chapter 9 . 12/26/2016
well nice chapter but lame ending that will never happen
YeagerMeister31 chapter 8 . 12/26/2016
well this was funny and slightly freaky that SakuIno keep finding themselves in weird compromising situations although funny also. Can't believe Iruka betrayed him though but oh well
YeagerMeister31 chapter 7 . 12/26/2016
well this chapter was interesting they all did pretty cool of course Naruto i the powerhouse glad he kicked ass
YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 12/26/2016
well can't beat a good cat fight with 2 of my fav Naruto women with my 3rd fav Anko as there Sensei can't wait for what happens next and Hinata is weird and needs anger management lol
YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 12/26/2016
well this was another interesting and funny chapter wonder what mrs Cow Haruno has planned there really is alot of bitches in this story
YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 12/25/2016
well this was so funny team Kakashi sux Team Anko is gonna be awesome sux that Hana interrupted SakuIno from reading Naruto's mind but still so funny
YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 12/25/2016
well this was interesting seems Sasgay is just as gay as usual and Hinata is just a bitch like Neji and well Kiba well most of the time is a bitch anywayz
YeagerMeister31 chapter 2 . 12/24/2016
well this was an interesting chapter and Anko yet again is funny as hell and another NaruSakuIno can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
well this was a surprise Hinata is a bitch didn't see that coming but i hardly care Sakura and Ino will be better then her soon I hope
Guest chapter 12 . 11/7/2016
hope you continue the story or if u havae on a nuther account plez let me know... love to finish the story
Guest chapter 11 . 11/7/2016
only thing I don't like is sasu hina that is all and that is the only lemon I got to see to now but ied think Naruto would have had sex or a bj befor sasuke. other than that keep up the good story. and keep righting if u every publish a book ied buy it you are a very good righter. keep me entertained is a hard thing to do considering I have combined ADHD.. so u are deff a good righter and im not a fan of books or reading but this just got me good. hope u pick up the story again after chap 12 I know its been a long time but I hope u see this and gives you a spark to continue the story or start righting again with a new one or harem lol I know I cant spell very good. but I hope u can actually read this I am 22 years old and have a hard time learning exp spelling I have no prob reading at all but just spelling and other stuff hope it give u inspiration on licfe and righting I have a lot of good storys and plots or Naruto but I cant do the things u do with story and keep them going a long time but ied love to give u sum plots and a starter story and see if u could pick up from there how It would help with the story...
Guest chapter 10 . 11/7/2016
plyz finish the story I love it so fair and the legth of the stor just keeps comeing I don't like short sotrys I know you do this on your own time so I thank you for your story and your time u put in to each chapter and righting the story I found this web side after I read a lot of chats on youtube but this is just as good as watching it in a videow lol . keep up the very good work love it
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