Reviews for Shopping
Blades252 chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
XD XD XD XD XD win is written all over this XD
silent hill luvr chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
omg that was so cute!

plz write some more james nd laura.

you did a rlly good job.
xXShadow077Xx chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
LOL! He can stand all the monsters and blood, but not a training bra! 2 GOOD!
Arktos chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
This is cute. Except I don't think James makes a very good father, if Laura can boss him around that easily ;)

No major problems with this. Just minor things I can't really put my thumb on exactly, and don't overall detract from the story itself.
SR-71A chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
jeanixx chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Now, don't go on calling James a failure. He might grab a pillow!

Awesome! It was cute and very amusing. Loved the description as always!

But really...if I had to take care of a girl like Laura, I'm sure I would punch her at the first 'fartface'.

They deserve each other.

Great job again. Me loves it ;D

-Jeani xx