Reviews for Humans in the Pridelands
Nuker850 chapter 6 . 6/12/2016
Its a good and decent story even though its kinda sad for the lions:( but this story tells the cruel and sad truth about whats happening in Africa and other parts of the Earth,humans killing lions and other animals for their fur,skin,and other parts of the animals for money and profit,the animals usually unable to defend themselves and their kind because of our guns that we have these days.(But i'm not blaming guns though,we should not blame on the weapons, but on the people/person who is using it for their intentions,some using it to defend their homes and family while others are using it to do harmful acts)And also describe the humans as cold-blooded and merciless which is true in some of the other this is a pretty decent you have a great day!
ClearEyes chapter 6 . 1/4/2013
I don't think you're cruel, but you showed some part of the truth. Humans do act that way, and unfortunately, the lions can't really fight back. It's sad, but I think that it is also what happens nowadays :/ sadly
Guest chapter 4 . 7/31/2012
Female hyenas have an enlarged phallus due to exposure to androgens in the womb. Basically the same as Congenital Androgen Hyperplasia in humans; they're intersex :P
Immaculate Devil chapter 2 . 1/28/2012
Awesome story. Jan the same guy from the Hellsing anime? Cause from the description and his attitude it sounds a lot like him.
roudyredd chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
dang it. adding humans is never a good thing to do to thesefic huh? how come people can't all be nice to africa? sigh sounds ineresting. -redd
The Other Dr. Who chapter 6 . 4/24/2010
Nice story, although with a very sad ending. Good job incorporating the hyenas' secret into the plot. Please write some more TLK stories soon!
tearthgrrl chapter 6 . 5/1/2009
Yeah, but a nice story.
WenWen chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Hey you guys, the lions are good!
qwertybirdy chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
YAY! Simba is dead! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!
qwertybirdy chapter 4 . 4/29/2009
tearthgrrl chapter 4 . 4/28/2009
One word: LOL
Cornelia'Red chapter 4 . 4/28/2009
awsome stroy! keep it up


Dnt Kill SIMBA!

please :D

tearthgrrl chapter 2 . 4/23/2009
National security: protecting the pridelands since...the humans invaded.