Reviews for The Matriarch of Destiny
Jose19 chapter 2 . 6/14
I will say this since you have forgotten but Danzo gave the order to kill everyone even Mikoto you do realize that he will have to kill Mikoto since it ruins his plan to take over the village.
hennessyswagg83 chapter 8 . 11/17/2017
Are you ever coming back?
hennessyswagg83 chapter 7 . 11/17/2017
How can you say in canon Sakura's parents were highly liked Civilians where in canon did you see they were 'highly liked' civilians lrt me know cause when really get to see her parents it's first revealed they'll very close to Ino's family and then that they ninjas now it's been revealed they were just genin but ninja nonetheless
hennessyswagg83 chapter 6 . 11/16/2017
Yes you're right it was never explained how Naruto failed 'three' times but it seems that everyone overlooks the concept that Kishimoto's version of Naruto wouldn't attempt an early graduation exam because he thinks he's an awesome ninja and wants to get out of the 'boring' Academy to start being a real ninja but I loved your approach to the 'Mizuki Incident' also the Kage Bunshin isn't forbidden and the reason it's variant Tajū Kage Bunshin is forbidden is because it doesn't create one or two clones it creates hundreds so the chakra requirement can be deadly to those that attempt it and it's Kishimoto fault because from what I've found out he was lazy to keep putting Tajū Kage Bunshin so he just had Naruto saying Kage Bunshin even though he was using the varient and there are several he actual writes it as suppose to be but he wasn't consistent but look at it from this perspective the Tajū Kage Bunshin is for creating hundreds of clones and the Kage Bunshin is for making one to several dozens good story so far which you touched on him being an Uzumaki more don't know if you'll eventually but wish you already did also the I think the reason people didn't know bout Minato and Kushina is because they were never married like Asuma and Kurenai and even though Naruto had his mother's name no one paid attention due to their blind hatred for him think bout it he looked like a carbon copy of Minato with whiskers and no one notice that either
princessbinas chapter 8 . 12/9/2015
Is this story dead?
cody chapter 8 . 3/14/2014
I loved this story I'll love it more when I read the rest given the fact that your great a writing great story's to be loved
Jose19 chapter 4 . 4/24/2013
This story clearly shows what type of impact Mikoto living will have on Sasuke, and Naruto's life because she has changed both of their destinies already in a way but I can't wait to see how much she impacts their lives.
Jose19 chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
I clearly want this story updated because it has a great storyline, and great drama as well with the loss of the Uchiha Clan due to the massacre but what will Naruto contribute to this CLan, and to the village as a whole.
UMMX chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
HAHAH I like your AN: they are so weak... First nobody knew about kushina and Minato. Only one that knew that Kushina was with a baby was kashai and he fuck up by talking to the dead...

Kushina was the most power woman in her generation so it easy to hide it.
Mana Tatsumiya chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
Okay, look.

This story is very interesting but you've got a few problems. First, all of your characters have a really, really formal, stilted way of speaking that detracts from the story, especially the kids. Most kids really don't speak with the same formality you're portraying, especially Naruto Uzumaki. You seem to be using more complicated words than necessary, resulting in a lack of flow in the story itself. For example:
"So thus how began Uzumaki Naruto's new life under the care of Uchiha Mikoto."
So thus how doesn't even make sense. Change the sentence to this:
"So began Uzumaki Naruto's new life under the care of Uchiha Mikoto."
And it flows better. See?
Hit me up on my account (Mana Tatsumiya) if you want a beta to help with stuff like that.
Jose19 chapter 8 . 8/31/2012
I want a update on this story as soon as possible because it looks very interesting and has the potential to become a great story in its own way.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
This is a fantastic story so update as soon possible.
Angelbloodlover chapter 8 . 8/14/2012
A very good story. One I liked a lot, you sure have talent, but not to be stupid or something but "looser" isn't written like that, but as "loser". Just thought you didn't know that or it could be that you're doing this on purpose. Why? Beats me. ;p

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with it.

- Greetings Angelbloodlover
blue ranger chapter 2 . 6/23/2012
Hello good story so far I did however catch a small error in the grammar,( but we need to know everything as possible to what had happened.")

Shouldn't it be ( but we need to know everything as soon as possible to know what happened.") Or something close to that.

Once again good story I look toward to being able to finish it. And if you want I can help with grammar but im not to good at spelling.
Toby860 chapter 8 . 3/12/2012
soraf so good. you should return eventually.
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