|Reviews for Quiet!|
| samus18 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Short and weird, but hey, it made me laugh. XDDD
| Kraken Guard chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Knew there was a goof-up somewhere. Are there any more goof-ups? hopefully i did not miss any, im still new to writing stories. Nobody ever writes any fanfics with Gothmog in them!
| Princess Arimae chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Did you mean 'Quiet'? Quite doesn't make much sense...
| anon chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
If you're going to post a story, it's common courtesy to at least use proper grammer. Sentences ALWAYS start with a capital letter - so do names and places, like 'Gothmog' and 'Minas Morgul'. Writing wise, it wasn't bad althoughh could do with some refinement. I hope you take this constructive critisism well and use it to improve you're writing because you do have potential and it was a decent storyline!