Reviews for Mary Anne Brandon
chocolate fish chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Hey :) Felt the need to peruse your account after reading some of thisisforyou's reviews, and as I was looking at your story titles, I realised something. I've totally read this story before! Way back when you first posted it, and I had just started reading fan fiction. I loved it then, and it's still just as lovely :) Hope your essay went well, ha ha. Stories are a great distraction, aren't they.

Chocolate Fish
CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
A great story. Very well written.
Countess of Western March chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
i liked the idea you gave of Alice reuniting with an old family member! nice! you should prolong it!
Tu Me Manques chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
This is really fast. I think you should slow it down a notch. There are spelling mistakes, but WHO doesn't make them?

Try to revise later chapters more carefully and I think that could really help you.