|Reviews for Birthday Present|
| SilentCrimsonTears chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
I laughed so hard reading this and my friend kept giving me strange looks but then she read it and laughed too.
| nefertani chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
| kairi026 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
hahahhah this is tha first time i read ahot yaoi and comedy comnbine and not to mention your use of words LOLL hahahhhahaha XD
| Izzy Ilmol chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Oh dear lord, this was random.
"Itachi was glued to the wall."
That must've been my favorite line in the whole thing. xD
And this would be my second favorite:
"And for years, there were no babies born in Konoha."
And of course, the bit about Shikamaru and Chouji. xD
Overall? Simply epic. I give you the key to the Internets.
| hidan24 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
oh god women! i love this damn story! mkae more chapters of this! PLEEAASSEE!
| reallyreallyverynotgood chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
This was hilarious and completely random. I feel bad for the people in the library that read it! Hah. No babies? Poor Konoha will be unpopulated soon.
| Psychogoth chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
| sasodei-lover2 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
super mega lol! that was so funni!
| autographontheradio chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
for two people, you would at least edit it so there isn't any puncatation mistakes.
Besides, it may be funny for your friend, but for some of us this isn't exactly the most funniest story. It doesn't have a funny side to it, its just extremely immature and not realistic.