Reviews for The Children
Guest chapter 5 . 3/17/2012
Awesome! Plzzzz next chapter!
mrs.addiecullen chapter 5 . 6/2/2011
update it very good
dragolove chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Continue please it was amazing story
MY SEXY TEDDY BEAR chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
I LOVE IT SO MUCH YOU SHOULD SO RIGHT MORE I TOTALLY LOVE IT
mialuvtwilight chapter 5 . 6/28/2010
i hope u continue this!
A is for Angel chapter 5 . 2/13/2010
love this chapter:)
Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 5 . 1/2/2010
Great chapter! Lucy doesn't even understand her effect on Peter! its hilarious! hahaha! Can't wait till the Homecoming dance! Sure fire for a great chapter! Update it soon! love it!

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RosaliceLCullen chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter!
twilightsun01 chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
Awesome chapter! Regardless of the lateness :D

When will Peter get it?
we'vehitanAllxTimexLow chapter 5 . 12/28/2009
I really liked it. Peter/Madi are my favorite so I like to see there relationship growing! Hope you update soon!
sprinter1 chapter 5 . 12/28/2009
lmao that was awesome! totally loved the ending haha
Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 4 . 12/27/2009
Cute Cute Cute! Can't wait for more! Hope you update soon! i loved where Madi was like:

"i don't know, you tell me." C.U.T.E.

And it was funny when Owen said to hiself"

'Breathe Owen, Breathe'

love it!

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Megsterbegsterz13 chapter 4 . 11/24/2009
You are a fantastic writer remember that. Keep writting i can tell this will be a great story!

Some suggestions for writers block I got from my english teacher (dont tell him i used got; he'd freak!) are to write random outbursts of nothing and something will come to you! Just remember to take out the random stuff before you update.
we'vehitanAllxTimexLow chapter 2 . 11/10/2009
I really hope you update this soon...it's been forever! I really love this story and hope you continue :-)
lizelle chapter 4 . 10/25/2009
i L.O.V.E this story so much plz

write me some more chapters of 'The Children' i beg u because i've read all of your stories and all of then amazed me so much!

lizelle roux
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