|Reviews for Dr Pepper|
| SonnyChadFan chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
This is such an amazing one shot! I really like how original it is and the way that they didn't just end up falling in love, share a kiss and then live happily ever after. The end was my favourite, I liked how the story was unresolved. )
| sheriff stilinski chapter 2 . 3/18/2010
so good! I LOVE the Dr Pepper thing :)
| Crystal chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I think all the parts are my favorite! Hurray! You rock!
| EGGplantISHevyROXurSOX chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
| IDreamInWishes chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Absolutely loved this :D
And my favourite part had to be with the fish haha.
I'm now going to read the sequal :D
| lifeisawesome chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
You wrote "impelled." The word is "compelled." "Impelled" sounds like "impaled" which I hope you don't mean. Cuz that's bad. Also, not "TeenWeekly." It's "TweenWeekly". With a 'w.'
| RandomHyperFreak chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Why does he call her Allison? It's good though!
| Padfootasaurus chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
i dont think the ending was rushed at all! i actually kinda loved it!(:
| Forkz94 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
That was really funny. It was good enough that I think it could actually go on the show.
| Lost in Believing chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Haha, I loved it! My names actually Alison, so it intruged me in the summary. Sonny and Chad were amusing with a chance of cuteness. The ending I didn't expect, so that was good. Awesome job!
| faerietaleredux chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
This was great. I wish I wasn't pressed for time, because I'd love to tell you in more detail all the little things I loved. As it is, I'll be giving the CliffNotes version.
The Dr. Pepper kiss part was fantastic. The kiss at the end of Chad/Sonny story is becoming a sort of cliche now, but you separated yours from the rest by giving this amazingly vivid description of flavors. It helps that I love Dr. Pepper so I know exactly what you're talking about. I kept wondering how the title was going to play into the story, and I wasn't disappointed. Though I'll admit, it seemed a little fast (in terms of their relationship) for tongue to play into the kiss...
I liked that this one-shot had a very coherent, smooth plot uet it wasn't overly simplistic either. I liked that you brought in a number of characters for cameos too. I particularly liked Portlyn's appearances. You didn't write her to be over-the-top or swooning over Chad. I'm really glad for that. I found it interesting that you have Chad say, "“Whitney! One, you are not the main girl. Portlyn is. You were suppose to be killed off back in season three, and trust me you would’ve been, if your uncle wasn’t the producer." It suggests he has at least a little respect for Portlyn (or he could just be acknowledging her place in their social hierarchy...either way the comment is interesting).
YOu had some great lines, but I can't point them out at the moment since I didn't write them down like a good reviewer would.
I liked the way you started the story-with him saying the wrong name. Made me think of an episode of Friends where Ross accidentally says the name of his ex-girlfriend (who he's still subconsciously in love with apparently) during his wedding vows. Talk about drama, right? At least in sitcoms the drama is funny and not necessarily nerve wrecking.
Thanks for the very enjoyable read. :)
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
oh my gosh i loved it. i was dying of laughter the entire way through. the comment about miley cyrus thinking she's two people and the comment comparing sonny to a goldfish made my day. this was quite a good story and i will definitely be favoriting it. good luck and keep it up! you've got talent!
| IGottaFindYou chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
“But that kiss meant something to me. Sonny, I lo-”
“CUT!” Portlyn Andrews’s voice sounded through the prestigious set of Mackenzie Falls. Chad sighed and rolled his eyes in an annoyed manner.
“Why are you stopping the scene, Portlyn?” Chad drew a sharp breath, and watched the dark-haired girl’s jaw tighten.
“You said her name Chad. Not my name. Hers.”
...OUCH!...I hope he actually does that on the show, cuz that'd be SWEET.:P:)
She crossed her arms. “Long enough to know your name is Chadford. What other secrets are you hiding? Is your middle name Dylanious? Or maybe you’re-”
...Heh heh... .:P
“‘But of course, I-’”
“‘But you know me, I am-’” Sonny groaned, and he skipped down to the next part.
“‘No one can resist me, because I am Cha-’”
“Keep going.” She couldn’t believe it was taking this long to find one simple part, or how conceited he was, or the fact that millions of girls checked this blog every day, just to read about his amazing personality, looks, and especially his ‘perfect, honey-cinnamon, sun kissed’ hair, and ‘periwinkle blue with tints of ocean depths’ eyes.
“But we’re skipping all the good parts!”
...Oh mn, you've got Chad totally pegged...this is AWESOME!:):P
“What now? More Hudgens pictures? Efron got kicked out of Disney? Cyrus ended up in a mental institution for thinking she was two people? Jonas gets a new girlfriend? Lohan gets a new girlfriend?”
*Laughs Long And Loudly* Oh man...you're AWESOME!:):):):P
“I love you, but I’m not in love with you. To me, I love you more as a friend, a sister, or maybe a pet fish. Goodbye, Sonny. Until another day.”
...Oh man, that's gonna be my favorite line of this WHOLE thing...he calls her a 'pet fish' for Pete's Sake! I LOVE it!:P:)
...Oh man, it wasn't until I read the note at the bottom that I even noticed who wrote this! (I didn't look at the name before I started reading) But OF COURSE it's you! Cuz you're AWESOME!:):)
| 0TwistedAngel0 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
lol. i found this so adorable.
| sonnycentral chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
This was amazing- one of the best stories I have read; I wish it wasn't just a one-shot. I love the part where Sonny calls Chad a male version of Barbie- that was hilarious! Anyway, great story!